baby shower invitations - Floral Carousel

Tags: baby shower invitations, floral, flowers, pacifier

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Maria Pormilli
  • Minted Feb 19, 2016
  • 12 Comments made
  • 15 Votes cast

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comments from Maria:

Flowers shower this invitation to welcome your bundle of joy.

tags:

baby shower invitations, floral, flowers, pacifier

colors shown:

Pink, Mint Green

fonts:

Chaparral Pro, Palatino Linotype

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Feb 24 2016

Edited on:

Feb 27 2016

average score:

1.60

comments:

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baby shower invitations - Floral Carousel by Maria Pormilli

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Maria Pormilli on Feb 26, 2016 at 6:26am
Maria Pormilli
  • Minted Feb 19, 2016
  • 12 Comments made
  • 15 Votes cast

I actually updated this quite a bit. After taking a step back and looking at it again, the horse seemed to overpower the floral design, and was more flat compared to the flowers. I removed the horse to focus on the flowers and text.

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Version 1 - submitted on Feb 24 2016 - hide

beverly on Feb 27, 2016 at 3:41pm

I would not use a script font on "Baby Shower" or the "Kristin Smith." The fonts portion of the design seems to need a little contrast to break it up a little. I don't know if you want to experiment with not only changing those two fonts, but also adding a green or pink outline to the black perhaps to help the text fit in with the overall design. I notice the horse is outlined in black but the flowers & pacifiers don't appear to be, so there is a little disparity there.