baby shower invitations - Oh Baby Balloons

Tags: baby shower invitations, Gray, Balloons, Simple

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Cat Wilcox
  • Minted Feb 23, 2016
  • 25 Comments made
  • 1010 Votes cast

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A simplistic gender neutral design. Sweet watercolor balloons float up,up and away to send your invitation.

tags:

baby shower invitations, Gray, Balloons, Simple

colors shown:

Gray and Black

fonts:

Heartwell

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Feb 24 2016

Edited on:

Feb 26 2016

average score:

1.99

comments:

0

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baby shower invitations - Oh Baby Balloons by Cat Wilcox

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Version 3 (poll) - submitted on Feb 24 2016 - hide

Corinne Aelbers on Feb 26, 2016 at 7:54am
Corinne Aelbers
  • Minted Jan 1, 2016
  • 3 Awards
  • 835 Comments made
  • 3093 Votes cast

I like B the larger and stronger colors of the balloons seem to make the composition work for me.

Joey Crisostomo-Wynne on Feb 26, 2016 at 8:53am
Joey Crisostomo-Wynne
  • Minted Aug 8, 2013
  • 4 Awards
  • 877 Comments made
  • 17500 Votes cast

I chose option B--i liked the composition of it better than option A.

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Jill Means on Feb 25, 2016 at 11:22am
Jill Means
  • Minted May 11, 2010
  • 120 Awards
  • 1739 Comments made
  • 41784 Votes cast

PLEASE don't be offended, but at first glance the balloons are looking a little like sperm. Which is actually kind of fun in a way... but I don't think you were going for that. I'm thinking you should use less balloons and make them bigger so they are more recognizable as balloons and make the design less busy. Also maybe use 2 typefaces to create more readability on the small type.