baby shower invitations - Fluttering With Excitement

Tags: baby shower invitations, Butterflies, banner, butterfly

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Heather Bunker
  • Minted Feb 20, 2016
  • 17 Comments made
  • 205 Votes cast

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This simple and fun butterfly inspired baby shower invitation expresses the excitement of awaiting baby arrival.

tags:

baby shower invitations, Butterflies, banner, butterfly

colors shown:

orange, purple, white

fonts:

Gill Sans, Grand Hotel

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Feb 20 2016

average score:

1.75

comments:

8

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baby shower invitations - Fluttering With Excitement by Heather Bunker

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Heather Bunker on Feb 21, 2016 at 8:11am
Heather Bunker
  • Minted Feb 20, 2016
  • 17 Comments made
  • 205 Votes cast

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Ilze Lucero on Feb 21, 2016 at 9:03am
Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
  • 19 Awards
  • 6692 Comments made
  • 78225 Votes cast

Cute idea, the address part seems a bit to tight and crowded

Corinne Aelbers on Feb 22, 2016 at 8:27am
Corinne Aelbers
  • Minted Jan 1, 2016
  • 3 Awards
  • 835 Comments made
  • 3093 Votes cast

Heather, I find the color of the lettering Fluttering a little to close in value to the background. I would like to see a version where the Fluttering lettering is white to see how that might look. Another thing you might like to play around with to see if you like it is lightening the value of the purple in the lettering. I really like the use of color, balance and composition of the lettering in the white stripe at the bottom, nice.

Agi Szabo on Feb 26, 2016 at 4:47am
Agi Szabo
  • Minted Feb 24, 2016
  • 99 Comments made
  • 2778 Votes cast

I agree with Corinne... I find the the lettering Fluttering a little to close in value to the background. I think the white would really balance with the white at the bottom. As for the rest of the purple lettering... I would go tonal. Maybe 30-60 percent of the orange background. Your balance and composition are are really nice!

CaroleeXpressions on Feb 27, 2016 at 9:52am
CaroleeXpressions
  • Minted Sep 14, 2014
  • 12 Awards
  • 1541 Comments made
  • 40627 Votes cast

Your bottom info is to busy and takes away from the main design!

beverly on Feb 27, 2016 at 4:24pm

Really "Wow" Colors. I like the bright fushia on orange. But--the "Fluttering," is hard to read. It makes my eyes vibrate to look at. I recommend making a brighter pink or purple--which color it is-- and getting rid of that shadow lettering effect behind it. Make the butterflies bigger around it instead. Make the yellow banner wider and the text under it wider and text under the white banner, wider. You have an edge to edge banner on the bottom, so the rest of your design needs to be wider with less blank space around it so it will look visually well proportioned. (I'm a free lance graphic artist.)

Cheryle on Feb 29, 2016 at 9:54am

I like the design, but am not crazy about this color combination. Maybe use butterfly colors--i.e. orange and black, yellow and black.

Danielle Dorton on Mar 1, 2016 at 9:02am
Danielle Dorton
  • Minted Jun 9, 2014
  • 63 Comments made
  • 783 Votes cast

I love the main design, but the "fluttering" is a little blurry to me.