party invitations - Blooms of yellow bridal shower

Tags: party invitations, gray, yellow, flowers, modern, chic, hip, sweet, soft

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Sarah Donovan
  • Minted Feb 21, 2012
  • 21 Comments made
  • 50 Votes cast

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comments from sarah:

This design was created after being inspired by the lovely and modern color combination of yellow and gray. This is for the bride who is modern and hip but still has her soft and sweet tastes.

tags:

party invitations, gray, yellow, flowers, modern, chic, hip, sweet, soft

colors shown:

yellow, gray

fonts:

Buttermilk, Cairo and Bebas neue

design inspired by:

Bridal Shower Invitation

submitted on:

Mar 14 2012

Edited on:

Mar 16 2012

average score:

2.48

comments:

2

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party invitations - Blooms of yellow bridal shower by Sarah Donovan

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Sarah Donovan on Mar 16, 2012 at 6:18am
Sarah Donovan
  • Minted Feb 21, 2012
  • 21 Comments made
  • 50 Votes cast

Thanks so much for the feedback, Lauren! I have made changes accordingly and I like it so much better!

Lauren Elisabeth on Mar 16, 2012 at 1:20pm
Lauren Elisabeth
  • Minted Sep 6, 2011
  • 2 Awards
  • 168 Comments made
  • 744 Votes cast

This looks soooo much better now :) One more suggestion would be to make the "please join us for a" the same size as the text in the three lines at the bottom.

Version 1 - submitted on Mar 14 2012 - hide

Gizem Darendelioglu on Mar 15, 2012 at 6:53am
Gizem Darendelioglu
  • Minted Nov 3, 2011
  • 11 Comments made
  • 19 Votes cast

love the shining yellow!

Lauren Elisabeth on Mar 15, 2012 at 6:12pm
Lauren Elisabeth
  • Minted Sep 6, 2011
  • 2 Awards
  • 168 Comments made
  • 744 Votes cast

i love the top of this, but the big yellow color block at the bottom is kind of distracting. maybe try just spacing out those lines of text to get rid of the color block...like split those 3 lines into more than 3 lines, or maybe try making this into a square design to eliminate the need for that yellow block? also there needs to be a bit more space between the yellow line and the date/time and the address..it's a little cramped. also a little squishy between the flower directly next to the "b" in bridal. you're on the right track, though! love the colors & your flowers.