art prints - The World is a Book

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Patina Creative
  • Minted Apr 29, 2013
  • 24 Comments made
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Beautiful Florence as the backdrop for an inspirational quote.

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art prints, Florence, Travel, city, quote, watercolor, photography

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Brown, Orange, Blue

fonts:

Wanderlust

design inspired by:

Rectangular Non-Personalizable Art Print

submitted on:

Jan 29 2016

Edited on:

Jan 29 2016

average score:

2.30

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Patina Creative on Jan 29, 2016 at 1:52pm
Patina Creative
  • Minted Apr 29, 2013
  • 24 Comments made
  • 939 Votes cast

I have made a few changes and would love to hear if the text reads better now?

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Britt DeMaris on Jan 29, 2016 at 2:06pm
Britt DeMaris
  • Minted Jan 17, 2016
  • 12 Comments made
  • 26 Votes cast

the end of the quote gets a little lost since there is not much contrast in the very light blue sky....can you lower the imagery of the buildings so there is a little more room for layout? Or try a poll with more contrast between lettering/sky :)

Joey Crisostomo-Wynne on Jan 29, 2016 at 2:30pm
Joey Crisostomo-Wynne
  • Minted Aug 8, 2013
  • 4 Awards
  • 877 Comments made
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I agree with the comment left by Britt DeMaris. Also, unless it's just me, I got a bit confused because I initially read it as follows "... those who do travel not read only..." Maybe if there was a way to fit it the word "not" right next to "do"? Again, it might just be me because even monograms confuse me! That aside, I think the whole concept is awesome and very inspiring. You also chose a very interesting picture to go along with it.

Belia Simm on Jan 29, 2016 at 4:18pm
Belia Simm
  • Minted May 21, 2015
  • 25 Awards
  • 567 Comments made
  • 14197 Votes cast

Lovely! I agree, I would move the "not" right after "do" and make some room on the top for the type. Also, the "who" touching the basilica looks a bit off...since it's the only type touching a structure. A bit more contrast will help.