birth announcements - Bun in the Oven

Tags: birth announcements, Photo, bold lettering

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Viper Paper Co.
  • Minted Nov 6, 2015
  • 36 Comments made
  • 4538 Votes cast

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comments from Katie:

Pregnancy announcement

tags:

birth announcements, Photo, bold lettering

colors shown:

White, photo

fonts:

Thirsty script, Montepetrum

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Birth Announcement

submitted on:

Dec 22 2015

average score:

2.35

comments:

7

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Viper Paper Co. on Dec 22, 2015 at 7:01pm
Viper Paper Co.
  • Minted Nov 6, 2015
  • 36 Comments made
  • 4538 Votes cast

I would love any feedback you have!

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Alyssa Jamal on Dec 23, 2015 at 7:50am
Alyssa Jamal
  • Minted May 3, 2014
  • 510 Comments made
  • 2517 Votes cast

I really like it!! Maybe the text "Baby Jacobson arriving in September 2016! Love Mike, Tara, & Smith" could be a little larger? But I also like how it lines up well with "OVEN!"

Jennifer Elwell on Dec 23, 2015 at 10:08am
Jennifer Elwell
  • Minted Aug 5, 2015
  • 84 Comments made
  • 2090 Votes cast

Super cute! Great job!

taryn bone on Dec 23, 2015 at 12:48pm
taryn bone
  • Minted Nov 17, 2015
  • 660 Comments made
  • 2140 Votes cast

I love the composition of the text. Maybe you could drop the "Love Mike, Tara, & Smith" from the front, as this could be an option for the back, that way you can make the font size larger for the baby's name and arrival date so that it still aligns with the above text.

Kelly Clabaugh on Dec 26, 2015 at 7:48pm
Kelly Clabaugh
  • Minted Nov 10, 2015
  • 1 Award
  • 95 Comments made
  • 762 Votes cast

Love this! Might try splitting the last two lines into three so you can increase the size a little bit. Such a fun design.

Melissa Casey on Jan 7, 2016 at 7:53pm
Melissa Casey
  • Minted Nov 24, 2012
  • 41 Awards
  • 2621 Comments made
  • 27707 Votes cast

Nice idea! My eye was drawn to the alignment of bun and oven - so GREAT job there. I would maybe suggest trying those bottom two lines a little larger. I'm guessing you were trying to align with the end of oven, so maybe shrink the "there's a bun in the oven" and then both the bottom two lines onto three lines with Baby Jacobson on it's own line, that way you do not go past the end of oven. Hope that helps!

Rebecca Lowe on Jan 11, 2016 at 12:49pm
Rebecca Lowe
  • Minted Apr 15, 2015
  • 1 Award
  • 315 Comments made
  • 2550 Votes cast

Yes, I agree with Alyssa, just so you can read the family names a bit easier. But it's such a cute, playful design!