graduation announcements - Minimalistic Diagonal

Tags: graduation announcements, minimal

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Sarah Buis
  • Minted Jun 18, 2015
  • 48 Comments made
  • 503 Votes cast

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A sweet, minimal approach to graduation announcement.

tags:

graduation announcements, minimal

colors shown:

light pink, white

fonts:

Adobe Caslon Pro

design inspired by:

Graduation Announcement

submitted on:

Dec 07 2015

average score:

2.28

comments:

10

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graduation announcements - Minimalistic Diagonal by Sarah Buis

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Sarah Buis on Dec 7, 2015 at 6:41pm
Sarah Buis
  • Minted Jun 18, 2015
  • 48 Comments made
  • 503 Votes cast

Would a thicker font be more appropriate so it doesn't blend in with the stripe?

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Jesse Hutchison on Dec 7, 2015 at 8:02pm
Jesse Hutchison
  • Minted Dec 5, 2015
  • 22 Comments made

I would say yes here. Also, maybe even a matching goldish/brownish color on the font to match the stripe. I would say take the eye dropper tool and try to pick up a color from the darker areas of the foil clipping mask and try to get the font to stand out, but match at the same time. If that doesn't work, maybe a darkish blue to match her dress. I hope that helps!

Jale Design on Dec 8, 2015 at 5:28pm
Jale Design
  • Minted Sep 2, 2015
  • 5 Comments made
  • 95 Votes cast

If you like the style of the font you could always play with the weight of the outline, bump it up a little. It is a hard read on top of the photo but I think it would work with a tiny amount of tweaking.

Little Words Design on Dec 8, 2015 at 6:10pm
Little Words Design
  • Minted Sep 25, 2013
  • 26 Awards
  • 1465 Comments made
  • 20620 Votes cast

I would say yes, or increase the size, or maybe even choose a different color. Something to make it pop against the background photo. Lovely design overall, though!

Bonjour Berry on Dec 9, 2015 at 3:28am
Bonjour Berry
  • Minted Aug 15, 2011
  • 96 Awards
  • 525 Comments made
  • 54015 Votes cast

Yes, I think a thicker font is required as it is a little hard to read. Using a black and white photo might also help to make your lovely design elements pop.

Danielle Haramut on Dec 9, 2015 at 8:31am
Danielle Haramut
  • Minted Apr 6, 2014
  • 351 Comments made
  • 4568 Votes cast

i do think a thicker font would help pop the info more

Laurie Beasley on Dec 9, 2015 at 8:03pm
Laurie Beasley
  • Minted Nov 21, 2015
  • 28 Comments made
  • 256 Votes cast

Yes. While this font is nice, it is getting lost because the stripe is so bold. I would recommend using a bigger, bolder font. Hope that helps!

Mansi on Dec 9, 2015 at 8:16pm
Mansi
  • Minted Feb 10, 2012
  • 60 Awards
  • 1830 Comments made
  • 8460 Votes cast

Definitely, add some weight and contrast to the type so it can stand out better! The gold frame is beautiful!

Miranda Ohrenberg on Dec 15, 2015 at 3:05pm
Miranda Ohrenberg
  • Minted Dec 11, 2014
  • 2 Awards
  • 32 Comments made
  • 426 Votes cast

I love the stripe but I really, really can't see the bottom text. A thicker font would work or possibly just make it slightly larger. Otherwise, looks awesome! :)