wedding invitations - Tuxedo

Tags: wedding invitations, Wedding

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Michael John Paul Lapar
  • Minted Oct 9, 2015
  • 9 Comments made
  • 71 Votes cast

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comments from Michael John Paul:

This is a very simple design which came up in my mind.

tags:

wedding invitations, Wedding

colors shown:

Black, White and Baby blue

fonts:

Charcuterie Catchwords, GwendolynROB, GwendolynROB, Futura, AphroditeSlimPro

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Nov 15 2015

Edited on:

Nov 18 2015

average score:

2.12

comments:

0

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wedding invitations - Tuxedo by Michael John Paul Lapar

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Version 1 - submitted on Nov 15 2015 - hide

Michael John Paul Lapar on Nov 15, 2015 at 2:16pm
Michael John Paul Lapar
  • Minted Oct 9, 2015
  • 9 Comments made
  • 71 Votes cast

I don't know if this design exist here in minted but this one came up in my mind and design it. Hope you guys Like it..

Basil Design Studio on Nov 16, 2015 at 5:51am
Basil Design Studio
  • Minted May 12, 2015
  • 15 Awards
  • 1746 Comments made
  • 24626 Votes cast

It's nice! The only thing I might recommend is to remove the underline from the couple's names. It's not needed and it makes it look like a web link to me. Otherwise, if you are able, give a just a little more space between the year and the location. Otherwise, I think the composition is nice and works well. Good job!

Little Words Design on Nov 17, 2015 at 1:20pm
Little Words Design
  • Minted Sep 25, 2013
  • 23 Awards
  • 1465 Comments made
  • 20620 Votes cast

Nice work, Michael! The one thing that comes to mind is to shrink the size of "you are invited to." It feels like it takes up too much space in the white triangle, and could use some more breathing room. Well done!

Melissa Casey on Nov 17, 2015 at 4:31pm
Melissa Casey
  • Minted Nov 24, 2012
  • 41 Awards
  • 2731 Comments made
  • 28198 Votes cast

This is something different and that's GREAT - it's FUN!! I might just suggest moving the text in the black area down a few notches, which means you may have to scale it down. Since the reception line is a script I do not think you need any kerning.

Michael John Paul Lapar on Nov 18, 2015 at 5:43am
Michael John Paul Lapar
  • Minted Oct 9, 2015
  • 9 Comments made
  • 71 Votes cast

Thank you for all the comment guys! I really appreciate it.. But can i still edit my design even if the submission is closed and people start voting?

R studio on Nov 18, 2015 at 7:42am
R studio
  • Minted Feb 16, 2009
  • 65 Awards
  • 315 Comments made
  • 8799 Votes cast

Hello Michael: Yes you can edit this until 10am PST today. I agree with the comment about the tracking (the spacing between the letters) on your reception, since it is a script, I don't think you need the space.