wedding invitations - Story Begins

Tags: wedding invitations, elegant, simple, dark, sophisticated, classic

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  • Minted Aug 4, 2012
  • 59 Comments made
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A simple design yet exudes the sense of elegance. My inspiration for this design is a hardbound story book I saw at a bookshop.


wedding invitations, elegant, simple, dark, sophisticated, classic

colors shown:

dark, black, gold


Quicksand, Quickpen

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Nov 06 2015

Edited on:

Nov 16 2015

average score:




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wedding invitations - Story Begins by kimbupamu


kimbupamu on Nov 6, 2015 at 5:58am
  • Minted Aug 4, 2012
  • 59 Comments made
  • 1142 Votes cast

Hello~ I'd like to ask for feedback for this design. Is it too simple?


kimbupamu on Nov 16, 2015 at 4:00pm
  • Minted Aug 4, 2012
  • 59 Comments made
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Thank you everyone for the suggestions! I updated the design. :)

Version 1 - submitted on Nov 06 2015 - hide

grace on Nov 9, 2015 at 7:40am

Looks whimsical and great font choices. I would add a sentence above "the story begins" so that it matches with the bottom part of your design (It starts to look empty on top). I also recommend making the space size the same for the top and bottom (the bottom space looks bigger). Lastly, I think it is hard to recognize the tiny motifs on the edge of the borders. They may or may not match with your overall design when you enlarge them, but you can always elaborate the small circles that lock the words "the story begins" and "on", they may be a great option for the border. Hope this helps!

Belia Simm on Nov 9, 2015 at 8:46pm
Belia Simm
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I would make the type bit lighter...the header and the date are getting a bit lost...otherwise...great concept. Good luck!

Kelly Clabaugh on Nov 10, 2015 at 10:28am
Kelly Clabaugh
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Personally, I like the simplicity of it

Kyla Donkersgoed on Nov 11, 2015 at 4:26pm
Kyla Donkersgoed
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Simple is great! I'd suggest brightening up some of the text and adding a hint of texture to the black background? Love it tho!

Mansi on Nov 13, 2015 at 10:26am
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I would brighten up your copy a little bit! It is a little hard to read! Hope this helps!