design - Organic Stripes

Tags: design, organic, rustic, abstract, stripes, dots, seashore, landscape, nature, Paper Dahlia

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comments from Kerry:

Stripes made up of loose painterly dots create an abstract landscape motif...

tags:

design, organic, rustic, abstract, stripes, dots, seashore, landscape, nature, Paper Dahlia

colors shown:

white, pale blue, chartreuse, sea blue

fonts:

none

design inspired by:

Outside Art

submitted on:

Oct 05 2015

Edited on:

Oct 10 2015

average score:

3.04

comments:

5

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design - Organic Stripes by Paper Dahlia

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Paper Dahlia on Oct 10, 2015 at 11:00pm
Paper Dahlia
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Thanks so much for the feedback!! I hope this latest version is an improvement...

Nazia Hyder on Oct 13, 2015 at 8:52pm
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Such a fun piece,love your color choices,it totally gels in with the Minted philosophy :) Thumbs up!

Susan Brown on Oct 16, 2015 at 4:00am
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Love the final version.

Lori Wemple on Nov 5, 2015 at 1:36pm
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Yay Kerry!!! xx

Smudge Design on Nov 5, 2015 at 8:42pm
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Congrats Kerry! Love. :)

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Paper Dahlia on Oct 5, 2015 at 11:50am
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Polling for organic edges (A) or neat edges(B)? Thanks!

Jennifer Wick on Oct 5, 2015 at 12:06pm
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I love the organic edges, it gives it movement. I feel like it looses something when the whole area is filled in.

Erin Deegan on Oct 5, 2015 at 12:13pm
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I voted for A. I love the organic edges. I has such great movement!

A.R. Pizarro on Oct 5, 2015 at 12:23pm
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Both work very well. I prefer B, since may be easier to see as one approaches from down the street or at intersection at Broadway. Nice work.

Panda and Pangolin on Oct 5, 2015 at 12:26pm
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This was tough - in the end, I like Option B, as it so cleverly bridges the line between abstract and landscape and really fills the space well.

Kim Dietrich Elam on Oct 5, 2015 at 12:35pm
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A for me!

Alison Jerry Designs on Oct 5, 2015 at 1:24pm
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Option A! It gives Minted that edgey appeal but yet not too much.

Marabou Design on Oct 5, 2015 at 1:25pm
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Thank you for the color update, Kerry! xx

Lea Delaveris on Oct 5, 2015 at 2:41pm
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A for me also :)

Stacey Meacham on Oct 5, 2015 at 3:47pm
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A, this is so fun Kerry!! Loving the organic edges.

Amy Payne on Oct 5, 2015 at 9:26pm
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I like the organic top! So much movement! Love this one!!

Maria Hilas Louie on Oct 5, 2015 at 9:50pm
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This is great! I prefer the organic edges!

Susan Moyal on Oct 6, 2015 at 5:41am
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I love A!

Jessie Steury on Oct 6, 2015 at 6:32am
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I like A a little bit better :)

Cherry Tree on Oct 6, 2015 at 8:23am
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Tough choice! I picked A, but I wonder if you might keep an organic edge along the top, and leave it clean along the sides, to split the difference?

Courtney Crane on Oct 6, 2015 at 3:52pm
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I like option A. It seems more artistic. I like B but the neatness seems to take away from it somehow, where A offers movement.

Bethania Lima on Oct 7, 2015 at 6:03am
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A engages the viewr, because of the movement suggestion. I would love to see the dots bellow the 2nd windown on the left more loose, in the sense that I see a column of dots going down from that window to the floor. I think the eye would flow better if it could go from left to right without being diverted to go down by that column. Am I making myself understood? Hopefully! But it is an amazing beautifull and engaging art and I do love it!

Carol Fazio on Oct 7, 2015 at 6:12am
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I like B. Just feels more finished to me and I like the juxtaposition of the organic shapes fitted into a defined space.

Salina Mack on Oct 7, 2015 at 8:12am
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I like the little bit of negative space of exposed exterior wall to show contrast.

Lulaloo on Oct 7, 2015 at 9:06am
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Love both, Only because I had to choose one :)

Katie Craig on Oct 7, 2015 at 9:42am
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Organic Edges!

Alison Jerry Designs on Oct 7, 2015 at 2:39pm
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Love the break up of the pattern. Adds a nice interest to this design.

Neeta Sawhney on Oct 8, 2015 at 12:33pm
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love it Kerry A for me

Marabou Design on Oct 8, 2015 at 5:51pm
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This concept reminds me of a tranquil landscape. I really, really love it!

lara on Oct 8, 2015 at 9:48pm

I really like the organic edges !

Mansi on Oct 9, 2015 at 9:36am
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Love the Organic! Makes it more dynamic!

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Paper Dahlia on Oct 5, 2015 at 10:53am
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Feedback is appreciated! Thanks! Larger image below...

Phrosne Ras on Oct 5, 2015 at 11:14am
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Awesome, cant choose between the two ;) (for different reasons)

Erin Deegan on Oct 5, 2015 at 11:22am
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I love the organic edges and colors. Amazing work!