valentine's day - Strong Foundation

Tags: valentine's day, Vintage

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Two Dog Design
  • Minted Sep 15, 2015
  • 5 Comments made
  • 92 Votes cast

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Inspired by the longevity of ephemera and love this design is meant to symbolise the strength required to sustain love and relationships.

tags:

valentine's day, Vintage

colors shown:

Sepia

fonts:

Botanica, Impact

design inspired by:

A7 Valentine's Day Card

submitted on:

Sep 15 2015

average score:

1.42

comments:

9

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Two Dog Design on Sep 15, 2015 at 7:03am
Two Dog Design
  • Minted Sep 15, 2015
  • 5 Comments made
  • 92 Votes cast

Any feed back would be greatly appreciated, thanks so much. I know you are all super busy. x

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Two Dog Design on Sep 15, 2015 at 7:02am
Two Dog Design
  • Minted Sep 15, 2015
  • 5 Comments made
  • 92 Votes cast

Looking for feedback from all you wonderfully talented people out there please. xxx

Michelle Afentoulis on Sep 15, 2015 at 8:49am
Michelle Afentoulis
  • Minted Nov 17, 2013
  • 567 Comments made
  • 10539 Votes cast

I think both fonts are a little hard to read on the background. I also feel like there's a bit of a disconnect with the font on the left and right. Some options to play with could be another image, moving the text together on one side or at the top, working with different font colors, etc. Hope that's a little helpful!

danielle on Sep 15, 2015 at 8:26pm

I agree with michelle :) I think the font style doesn't connect with each other. It's also hard to read since you changed the color of the photo to sepia :) You can play with the placing of the text :)

Panda and Pangolin on Sep 17, 2015 at 10:09am
Panda and Pangolin
  • Minted May 23, 2012
  • 810 Comments made
  • 2273 Votes cast

I agree with Michelle - I like the font on the right, but it might need a shadow to make it "pop" a bit more - maybe try it all in that font with a shadow behind it?

Christie Kelly on Sep 17, 2015 at 10:34am
Christie Kelly
  • Minted Dec 17, 2014
  • 19 Awards
  • 465 Comments made
  • 6283 Votes cast

Love the concept! I'm sure people have some great old photos this could work with. Totally agree about the fonts. I like the direction of the bottom right, but still feels like it could be more handwritten. Font on the left feels too bold and masculine for such a sweet sentiment. Good luck!

Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Sep 21, 2015 at 6:52pm
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
  • Minted Mar 26, 2011
  • 182 Awards
  • 4655 Comments made
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Hi Maggie, I agree with the other Minites on trying out some other color/fonts. I think a lovely script/hand written font would look great, especially if you put the verse above the couple. I think it would have more impact.

Abby on Sep 23, 2015 at 7:56pm
Abby
  • Minted Mar 3, 2014
  • 16 Comments made
  • 57 Votes cast

This photo makes a really great card and the phrase goes well with the brick wall! I would go with a bolder, script font and make use of more of the space near the top. The current font and color is difficult to read and doesn't match the romantic photo. Perhaps try the photo in black and white and use a color for the text? You might want to consider some punctuation or some kind of separation between "true love isn't found" and "it's built."

Sarah Leslie on Sep 29, 2015 at 1:30pm
Sarah Leslie
  • Minted Aug 16, 2015
  • 125 Comments made
  • 3087 Votes cast

It's rather difficult to read the text on this image. I would perhaps make a space on top for the quote and do not use "all caps" since this often insinuates yelling :) Lovely quote.