save the date cards - Men's Best Friend

Tags: save the date cards, Green, Modern, Stripes, Circle, Geometric

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Lauren Fortinberry
  • Minted Nov 23, 2014
  • 14 Comments made
  • 552 Votes cast

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A one photo contemporary Save the Date announcement with transparent copy blocking shapes

tags:

save the date cards, Green, Modern, Stripes, Circle, Geometric

colors shown:

white, grey, green

fonts:

Bodoni 72 Smallcaps, SignPainter,

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Aug 27 2015

Edited on:

Sep 04 2015

average score:

2.45

comments:

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save the date cards - Men's Best Friend by Lauren Fortinberry

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Lauren Fortinberry on Aug 27, 2015 at 11:41am
Lauren Fortinberry
  • Minted Nov 23, 2014
  • 14 Comments made
  • 552 Votes cast

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. What do you think of the color? I would like something that is broad enough and gender neutral for all couples to use.

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Lisa Cersovsky on Aug 29, 2015 at 7:25am
Lisa Cersovsky
  • Minted Jun 30, 2012
  • 47 Awards
  • 987 Comments made
  • 16048 Votes cast

I chose A, looks cleaner to me.

Simona Cavallaro on Aug 31, 2015 at 11:09am
Simona Cavallaro
  • Minted Oct 19, 2014
  • 116 Awards
  • 1666 Comments made
  • 15099 Votes cast

A. I don't think the second bar is adding anything more to the design.

Snow and Ivy on Sep 2, 2015 at 5:15pm
Snow and Ivy
  • Minted Mar 7, 2010
  • 202 Awards
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  • 20305 Votes cast

Hey! Did you try the 'Save the Date' without a white bar behind it? I think you may not need it... it feels like its competing with the large date circle a bit - and I think you can let the date circle win :)

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Michelle Afentoulis on Aug 27, 2015 at 11:52am
Michelle Afentoulis
  • Minted Nov 17, 2013
  • 567 Comments made
  • 10539 Votes cast

A couple thoughts - Colorwise, I think I'd choose that dark mint green color that's on the graffiti area. I'd also shift your circle with the date up a bit so it's not going over a piece of the wall. Last thought is to maybe keep the translucent bar behind save the date, but take it away from the name and getting married part. Some things to play around with!

Little Words Design on Aug 27, 2015 at 4:33pm
Little Words Design
  • Minted Sep 25, 2013
  • 23 Awards
  • 1461 Comments made
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I like where this has started, Lauren! I agree with Michelle about aligning your color palette with colors found in the photo. It will streamline your overall look. Also, I might move everything - including the photo, down, so your text isn't scrunched up at the top. Or, you could try moving just the text down to the bottom, and your circle with date closer to the top. Good luck!