personal stationery - Official Baseball Business

Tags: personal stationery, Baseball, Sports, Ball Park, Atheletic, Home Run

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CaroleeXpressions
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comments from Carole:

The love of Baseball starts at a young age and continues for a lifetime. This stationary will bring the kid out of you, just in a mature way!

tags:

personal stationery, Baseball, Sports, Ball Park, Atheletic, Home Run

colors shown:

Red, Blue, White, Gray

fonts:

Matchmaker, Helivetic Condense

design inspired by:

A2 Non-Photo Stationery

submitted on:

Jul 29 2015

Edited on:

Aug 08 2015

average score:

2.41

comments:

0

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final average score: 2.41
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personal stationery - Official Baseball Business by CaroleeXpressions

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CaroleeXpressions on Jul 29, 2015 at 10:44am
CaroleeXpressions
  • Minted Sep 14, 2014
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I have made some of the suggested changes? WHAT DO YOU THINK? Is this working off centered.

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Version 5 - submitted on Aug 07 2015 - no comments

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Liz Conley on Aug 3, 2015 at 11:21pm
Liz Conley
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I chose C but B might work for me too if you removed the curve on the text and had it straight beneath the insignia.

curiouszhi design on Aug 5, 2015 at 2:09pm
curiouszhi design
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A for me... feels more balanced!

Shirley Lin Schneider on Aug 5, 2015 at 4:48pm
Shirley Lin Schneider
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I like the layout of B best. It feels the most balanced to me.

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Chris Griffith on Jul 31, 2015 at 3:32pm
Chris Griffith
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Super cool! I like B and I would make the Special Business larger.

Kate Ross on Aug 1, 2015 at 6:07am
Kate Ross
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I love the edits. I prefer b and agree with Chris on making official business larger. I think it he bottom part of the design would pop with more impact of the top portion of the page was stark white without the texture so all baseball details are at the bottom. It's such a cool design and surely a contender for guys and writing on a path. Really nicely done, Carole.

Liz Conley on Aug 2, 2015 at 1:55pm
Liz Conley
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I chose A - the design reads more like a baseball when you can see both seams.

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Kate Ross on Jul 29, 2015 at 12:13pm
Kate Ross
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I love it. I know the guys like less. You could easily just have the bottom stitch and the texture elements and still have a really strong design.