personal stationery - Mosaic Gold

Tags: personal stationery, personal stationery, mosaic, gold foil, foil, gold, modern, colorful

Designers were asked to submit a chic and modern design. If you see a design that is not available for sale, please email us and we will help you purchase the design.

About Joyce

Joyrich Design Company
  • Minted Jan 3, 2012
  • 34 Comments made
  • 1344 Votes cast

Share This Design

To link to this design on other websites, copy & paste this HTML.

About the Design

comments from Joyce:

Modern mosaic stationery with gold foil accents.

tags:

personal stationery, personal stationery, mosaic, gold foil, foil, gold, modern, colorful

colors shown:

blue, green, brown, gold

fonts:

Thyssen J italic

design inspired by:

A2 Non-Photo Stationery

submitted on:

Aug 01 2015

Edited on:

Aug 07 2015

average score:

1.90

comments:

0

From the Desk of: Personal Stationery Challenge - See designs critique this design

rating closed
final average score: 1.90
rating distribution
5
4
3
2
1
personal stationery - Mosaic Gold by Joyrich Design Company

featured

Joyrich Design Company on Aug 2, 2015 at 4:37pm
Joyrich Design Company
  • Minted Jan 3, 2012
  • 34 Comments made
  • 1344 Votes cast

Does this font work?

comments

Version 2 (poll) - submitted on Aug 01 2015 - no comments

Version 1 - submitted on Aug 01 2015 - hide

Christina DeHayes on Aug 4, 2015 at 6:55am
Christina DeHayes
  • Minted Jul 13, 2015
  • 53 Comments made
  • 1836 Votes cast

It would be interesting to see the text at the top of the design as well. I think the font works well, but perhaps a slightly more muted color would accent the background colors in a really nice way.

Christina DeHayes on Aug 4, 2015 at 6:55am
Christina DeHayes
  • Minted Jul 13, 2015
  • 53 Comments made
  • 1836 Votes cast

It would be interesting to see the text at the top of the design as well. I think the font works well, but perhaps a slightly more muted color would accent the background colors in a really nice way.

Panda and Pangolin on Aug 4, 2015 at 9:49am
Panda and Pangolin
  • Minted May 23, 2012
  • 810 Comments made
  • 2273 Votes cast

I like the font, but I think the way it curves is fighting the shape it's in - maybe play with the curvature of the text a little.

Kate Ross on Aug 4, 2015 at 2:42pm
Kate Ross
  • Minted May 6, 2013
  • 39 Awards
  • 1749 Comments made
  • 32727 Votes cast

I think you have a good design here. I love the top elements. I feel like the text is completing too much with the design elements on the bottom. I actually think you could delete the bottom pieces and move the name up to the top right. The curvature is almost there to hug the top elements. Or even put the name center along the bottom with no curve in it. Just really straight. It might compliment the wavy style on top and look more balanced.

Joyrich Design Company on Aug 4, 2015 at 2:56pm
Joyrich Design Company
  • Minted Jan 3, 2012
  • 34 Comments made
  • 1344 Votes cast

Thanks for all of your feedback and advice! I will do a poll soon

Laura Condouris on Aug 4, 2015 at 3:49pm
Laura Condouris
  • Minted Sep 20, 2009
  • 36 Awards
  • 579 Comments made
  • 17347 Votes cast

The geometric pattern is so vibrant, that I think a simpler font in a straight line- maybe even a sans-serif- might provide a better contrast.