wedding invitations - Paper Umbrellas

Tags: wedding invitations, umbrellas, cherry blossom, Japanese

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Shima Shima
  • Minted Oct 17, 2011
  • 3 Comments made

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comments from Carolyn:

Graphic and modern yet warm and happy. Paper Umbrellas with subtle hints of Japanese cherry blossom petals create a sense of whimsy.

tags:

wedding invitations, umbrellas, cherry blossom, Japanese

colors shown:

Gray, Pink, Mint Green, Yellow

fonts:

Gotham Bold & Gotham HTF

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Oct 31 2011

Edited on:

Nov 02 2011

average score:

2.70

comments:

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wedding invitations - Paper Umbrellas by Shima Shima

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Version 1 - submitted on Oct 31 2011 - hide

Carol Fazio on Oct 31, 2011 at 12:22pm
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
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Really pretty! Love your illustrations! I might take the copy down in size just a bit to give you more white space. You can lose the address and the period after 4 pm to give you more room. I might try a lighter weight to the body copy too.

Up Up Creative on Oct 31, 2011 at 5:35pm
Up Up Creative
  • Minted Jan 24, 2010
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i agree with carol on the overall size and weight of the text. maybe even a gotham book or gotham light might do the trick?

Shima Shima on Oct 31, 2011 at 9:00pm
Shima Shima
  • Minted Oct 17, 2011
  • 3 Comments made

Thanks ladies! I didn't realize the cut off date had shifted so it looks like I have some time to implement your suggestions! Thanks again!!