wedding invitations - Throw the Bouquet

Tags: wedding invitations, bouquet, drawn, flowers, roses, leaves, petals

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Katherine Morgan
  • Minted Feb 1, 2010
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  • 41 Comments made
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This card features a hand drawn bouquet of roses proclaiming the marriage of the happy couple.

tags:

wedding invitations, bouquet, drawn, flowers, roses, leaves, petals

colors shown:

red, yellow, grey

fonts:

Adobe Caslon Pro

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Sep 30 2011

Edited on:

Oct 16 2011

average score:

2.06

comments:

2

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wedding invitations - Throw the Bouquet by Katherine Morgan

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Katherine Morgan on Oct 16, 2011 at 9:59am
Katherine Morgan
  • Minted Feb 1, 2010
  • 2 Awards
  • 41 Comments made
  • 1632 Votes cast

Thank you ladies for you help! I changed the text a bit and made the bouquet larger to give it more presence. Tell me what you think!

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Simply Shira on Oct 16, 2011 at 10:42am
Simply Shira
  • Minted Aug 1, 2011
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Hello Katherine....Lovely. For me, some simple restructuring of the flow of the content as already mention by some of the gang and giving the flower arrangement a little more punch is all this really needs. You are off to a great start for sure!!!

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Sep 30, 2011 at 7:28pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
  • Minted Feb 10, 2011
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pretty! I like your single rose at the bottom the best.

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Jill Means on Sep 30, 2011 at 9:27pm
Jill Means
  • Minted May 11, 2010
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Usually you try avoid text making a shape like a pyramid or triangle. So I would rearrange the typography a different way. I like the hand drawn flowers but they kind of lack something??? Maybe make them a lot bigger and have them bleed off the edge? Or add the stems and a flowing ribbon. I don't know... play around. ;)

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Sincerely Jackie on Oct 1, 2011 at 3:55pm
Sincerely Jackie
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Great start! I agree with everything Jill said about the layout, and I would also add a little something extra with the "and" in the names. Making the "and" smaller might help the names stand out more.

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Kerleisha Jones on Oct 2, 2011 at 9:40am
Kerleisha Jones
  • Minted Mar 5, 2011
  • 6 Comments made
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Beautiful! I love the simplicity of the single rose at the bottom. Would you consider rotating it 90 degrees to kind of frame the bottom of the text? I do agree with Jill about the bouquet- as detailed as it is, I feel like something's missing. I think a simple ribbon could be the touch.

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Debb W on Oct 13, 2011 at 9:59am
Debb W
  • Minted Jul 14, 2011
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Very pretty.

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