digital invitations - Hello Diwali

Tags: digital invitations, Diwali, invitations, digital, katy, kaitlyn, Jenny,

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Neeta Sawhney
  • Minted Dec 4, 2011
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comments from Harpreet:

This Diwali digital invitation is one that is classic can be used for other invites such as christmas or thanksgiving with a mabling backgroud

tags:

digital invitations, Diwali, invitations, digital, katy, kaitlyn, Jenny,

colors shown:

pink, rose, black

fonts:

mesquite,

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Apr 18 2015

Edited on:

May 04 2015

average score:

1.82

comments:

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digital invitations - Hello Diwali by Neeta Sawhney

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Neeta Sawhney on Apr 18, 2015 at 1:51pm
Neeta Sawhney
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Hello there minties while i was putting this invite in i realized one thing do not need. This marbling is my speciality and i would like your critique this is part of a line of cards as well as thank you cards I would really appreciate your input. thanks Neeta

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Jan Shepherd on May 21, 2015 at 4:54am
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Neeta the marbling is lovely - adds a touch of elegance! good luck in the contest :)

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Apr 30, 2015 at 12:52pm
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I voted A :)

Makewells on May 1, 2015 at 8:15am
Makewells
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A for me! I think it's nice without the added flourishes :)

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Apr 30, 2015 at 12:27pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
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I voted B. I don;t think you need those ornaments at the top and bottom. Also, I'd recommend taking out "time" and bring the date/time and address lines up closer to the location line and have them in that same font (as location). Getting close! Good luck!

Owl and Toad on Apr 30, 2015 at 12:39pm
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I prefer the fonts in B. I agree with Kim about taking out the ornaments and the other suggestions she made.

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Apr 30, 2015 at 6:00am
Kim Dietrich Elam
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I voted B because I think "Diwali Party" should stand out from the other type. You could experiment with some other options for the secondary text font, but I prefer B from those here. I would add some more party information like the date and time. I think you can leave off the reply information if this is a digital invitation, Minted would add it back in if they were to sell it on paper. Good luck!!

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Melissa Casey on Apr 21, 2015 at 3:43pm
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I prefer the fonts in A. I would perhaps play with the font sizes a little as the Diwali font is so large compared to the rest. Love the marble effect in the corners - definitely different!

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Sam Dubeau on Apr 21, 2015 at 5:49am
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The marbling is beautiful! I might suggest using a friendlier/delicate font option for the the text in black. It feels a little heavy in comparison to the soft nature of "Diwali Party" and the colour of the marble corners. That's my suggestion. All the best!

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Lisa Cersovsky on Apr 20, 2015 at 9:42pm
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I like B but I like the larger cursive text of A. Also, I think the "where" is not in the center with the rest of the text. Hope that helps!

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Apr 20, 2015 at 6:52am
Kim Dietrich Elam
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Love the marbling, Neeta! A couple of suggestions - I would recommend centering all the text, so that it all has the same center point, increasing the leading (spacing) between the lines of text, and increasing the size of the RSVP lines. Good luck!

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