journals - Light Bulb

Tags: journals, light bulb, simple, ideas

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Daisy
  • Minted Aug 5, 2011
  • 2 Comments made

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comments from Daisy:

A simple journal cover with a personalizable name tag. Great notebook for jotting down ideas. Eco-friendly.

tags:

journals, light bulb, simple, ideas

colors shown:

monochrome, black

fonts:

Arial Bolded

design inspired by:

Portrait Notebook

submitted on:

Aug 05 2011

Edited on:

Aug 05 2011

average score:

2.20

comments:

6

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Dawn Jasper on Aug 5, 2011 at 11:17pm
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 49 Awards
  • 7817 Comments made
  • 144380 Votes cast

Love the changes! That kraft paper texture is nice and I really like your illustration. I might suggest making up a name instead of just "enter name here".

Leah Morgan on Aug 7, 2011 at 5:51pm
Leah Morgan
  • Minted Aug 7, 2011
  • 4 Comments made
  • 1 Vote cast

love it! i would suggest adding more leading between the "property of" and "enter Name here" Also use "small caps" instead of just making the first letters larger. These are nitpicky critiques just so that you can win!

Ana Gonzalez on Aug 8, 2011 at 7:33am
Ana Gonzalez
  • Minted Jun 11, 2010
  • 35 Awards
  • 3566 Comments made
  • 14086 Votes cast

This is totally one of my favorites. I would move the name down and put it in a darker brown. So it doesn't compete with "ideas". Also take of the "Property of:" you don't need it. But wonderful Idea, ha!

Daisy on Aug 8, 2011 at 1:55pm
Daisy
  • Minted Aug 5, 2011
  • 2 Comments made

Thank you for your comments! I will make changes and update soon. :) More critiques are welcomed!

Monica Tuazon on Aug 23, 2011 at 5:31pm
Monica Tuazon
  • Minted Oct 28, 2010
  • 34 Awards
  • 1125 Comments made
  • 2831 Votes cast

Love the focus on the shape of the light bulb, and the "ideas" text

Guess What Design Studio on Aug 29, 2011 at 5:15am
Guess What Design Studio
  • Minted May 6, 2008
  • 140 Awards
  • 6276 Comments made
  • 19691 Votes cast

Love this! :)

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