moving announcements - Scripted

Tags: moving announcements, Craft, House, New Address, Script, Strangelove, Illustration, Bethany Anderson, Minted

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Bethany Anderson
  • Minted May 3, 2010
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This cute house announcement boasts script text and craft texture.

tags:

moving announcements, Craft, House, New Address, Script, Strangelove, Illustration, Bethany Anderson, Minted

colors shown:

Craft

fonts:

Veneer, Business Penmanship, Strangelove

design inspired by:

A2 Photo Moving Announcement

submitted on:

Mar 07 2015

Edited on:

Mar 22 2015

average score:

3.13

comments:

4

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Phrosne Ras on Mar 24, 2015 at 4:22am
Phrosne Ras
  • Minted Jul 11, 2012
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i love this wish i thought of it :)

Jill Corbin on Mar 25, 2015 at 3:02pm
Jill Corbin
  • Minted Nov 24, 2014
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Love the final version Bethany!

Jill Corbin on May 12, 2015 at 7:13am
Jill Corbin
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Congratulations, Bethany!

Nazia Hyder on May 12, 2015 at 1:37pm
Nazia Hyder
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Congrats!

Version 1 - submitted on Mar 07 2015 - hide

Jill Corbin on Mar 8, 2015 at 10:53am
Jill Corbin
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This design has great potential! I like the font combination and the way the text is cut off by the edges of the house. I did notice that there is no zip code for the address, so maybe you could resize the text at the top to make room for the postal code at the bottom. Additionally, the text below the house looks a little lonely by itself; maybe you could increase the size of the text (or create a longer phrase). Also consider an exclamation point for friendly emphasis :) Good luck!

Jill Corbin on Mar 8, 2015 at 11:11am
Jill Corbin
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Hi Bethany, I just noticed that you have an apostrophe in "Davidson's". The correct form in this case would be "Davidsons" without the apostrophe. The addition of the apostrophe implies either a contraction ("Davidson is") or possession, and I know this takes us further into the weeds, but the apostrophe would actually be after the "s" in the plural possessive case (such as "the Davidsons' new address)! ;-D Hope this helps!

Jennifer Wick on Mar 14, 2015 at 6:18am
Jennifer Wick
  • Minted Sep 2, 2010
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I love this, Bethany! It's so eye-catching and the mix of typefaces makes this feel so custom. Great job!!