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Tags: moving announcements, stars, geometry, shapes,

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Katherine Soares
  • Minted Sep 19, 2013
  • 39 Comments made
  • 419 Votes cast

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This fun geometric design asks friends and family to follow the stars to your new home!

tags:

moving announcements, stars, geometry, shapes,

colors shown:

purple, white

fonts:

Miss Le Gatees, Core Deco B4, Luella

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Moving Announcement

submitted on:

Mar 09 2015

Edited on:

Mar 17 2015

average score:

2.13

comments:

0

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Katherine Soares on Mar 9, 2015 at 10:04am
Katherine Soares
  • Minted Sep 19, 2013
  • 39 Comments made
  • 419 Votes cast

Would love any sort of feedback! Too many fonts?

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Jennifer Postorino on Mar 13, 2015 at 9:54am
Jennifer Postorino
  • Minted Dec 27, 2008
  • 184 Awards
  • 4451 Comments made
  • 51906 Votes cast

i would play with your type. it's a cute concept but not very readable at the moment. maybe simplify the design and scale down the constellation as a whole and let it sit alone by itself toward the upper middle of the square, then have all of your type/info underneath it. hope this helps :)

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Celene Mendez on Mar 12, 2015 at 9:35am
Celene Mendez
  • Minted Feb 22, 2012
  • 28 Comments made
  • 2995 Votes cast

Love your concept. Just a little grammatical error in the last name, change it to Crawleys or Crawleys' (without an apostrophe or the apostrophe at the end) but generally you only need to use an -s to form the plurals of nouns in the case of family names. Hope this help! :)

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Blustery August on Mar 9, 2015 at 5:31pm
Blustery August
  • Minted Feb 28, 2013
  • 17 Awards
  • 127 Comments made
  • 12517 Votes cast

Love the stars. Just a little heads up, I think you may have a typo on "Santuary"??? Sanctuary?

Katherine Soares on Mar 9, 2015 at 7:14pm
Katherine Soares
  • Minted Sep 19, 2013
  • 39 Comments made
  • 419 Votes cast

Thanks so much! You stare at something for so long you don't even notice the typos!

xolaura on Mar 11, 2015 at 12:56pm
xolaura
  • Minted Jul 19, 2011
  • 2 Awards
  • 55 Comments made
  • 229 Votes cast

love the constellations idea!