moving announcements - Before Moving, After Moving

Tags: moving announcements, home, moving, moving boxes, moving damage, plant, lamp, household goods, new home, moved

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Flowerbox Greetings
  • Minted May 21, 2014
  • 14 Comments made
  • 939 Votes cast

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Every move has a little damage. Humorous moving announcement for family and friends.

tags:

moving announcements, home, moving, moving boxes, moving damage, plant, lamp, household goods, new home, moved

colors shown:

Brown, black, blue, red, green

fonts:

Wisdom Script, Gill Sans

design inspired by:

A2 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 08 2015

Edited on:

Mar 16 2015

average score:

2.25

comments:

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moving announcements - Before Moving, After Moving by Flowerbox Greetings

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Flowerbox Greetings on Mar 8, 2015 at 6:59pm
Flowerbox Greetings
  • Minted May 21, 2014
  • 14 Comments made
  • 939 Votes cast

Critiques and advice welcome. Does the design work? Is the humor coming across?

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Flowerbox Greetings on Mar 15, 2015 at 6:27am
Flowerbox Greetings
  • Minted May 21, 2014
  • 14 Comments made
  • 939 Votes cast

Thanks everyone for the very constructive comments! I made revisions based on them--added a crack to the lamp, adjusted the shade, added some broken glass bits, and revised the text to make the family name more prominent. I'm also trying this poll function for the first time. Thanks!

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Katherine Soares on Mar 9, 2015 at 11:32am
Katherine Soares
  • Minted Sep 19, 2013
  • 39 Comments made
  • 419 Votes cast

I think this is really funny!

Jennifer Postorino on Mar 11, 2015 at 9:46am
Jennifer Postorino
  • Minted Dec 27, 2008
  • 176 Awards
  • 4419 Comments made
  • 51403 Votes cast

i can' totally relate to this! instead of having the lamp shade crooked maybe put a crack in it and maybe put some shattered glass around one of the bottom boxes ;)

Ria Sharon on Mar 12, 2015 at 7:04am
Ria Sharon
  • Minted Dec 24, 2014
  • 1 Award
  • 279 Comments made
  • 1846 Votes cast

Totally funny! Great concept!

Christina Novak on Mar 14, 2015 at 8:24am
Christina Novak
  • Minted Nov 4, 2011
  • 50 Awards
  • 2296 Comments made
  • 29101 Votes cast

Great idea! I agree with Jen. We did have broken glass after our move. Maybe you could make the before and after smaller and put the line "The Jeffersons have moved" at the top of the announcement. People who receive it might want to see the family name bigger and first.