party invitations - of Dreams and Heroes

Tags: party invitations, superhero, comic book , comic, party invitations, children, kids, birthday, invitation , party, celebrate

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Dalitso Malikebu
  • Minted Feb 26, 2015
  • 5 Comments made

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A comic book themed birthday party invitation featuring a halftone pattern

tags:

party invitations, superhero, comic book , comic, party invitations, children, kids, birthday, invitation , party, celebrate

colors shown:

blue, yellow

fonts:

celebrate, Futura

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Feb 26 2015

Edited on:

Mar 10 2015

average score:

2.18

comments:

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party invitations - of Dreams and Heroes by Dalitso Malikebu

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Dalitso Malikebu on Feb 26, 2015 at 6:48am
Dalitso Malikebu
  • Minted Feb 26, 2015
  • 5 Comments made

My first minted challenge, I would like to know what you think especially on the type arrangement

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Erin Deegan on Mar 1, 2015 at 1:45pm
Erin Deegan
  • Minted Nov 29, 2010
  • 350 Awards
  • 2338 Comments made
  • 138639 Votes cast

I like B best. The addition of yellow is very nice.

Jennifer Postorino on Mar 3, 2015 at 8:36am
Jennifer Postorino
  • Minted Dec 27, 2008
  • 191 Awards
  • 4451 Comments made
  • 51906 Votes cast

i like B. have you thought about reversing the yellow at all... back the section that the yellow text is sitting over right now yellow with black dots and then make the type black outline with white fill? maybe you could even fill in some of the other background shapes with bold colors so it pops more like a comic book :) welcome to minted!!!

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Leslie Ann Jones on Feb 27, 2015 at 8:29pm
Leslie Ann Jones
  • Minted Jun 9, 2010
  • 24 Awards
  • 669 Comments made
  • 14330 Votes cast

Hi Dalitso! Welcome to Minted. I really love the comic book concept, but I think there's a bit too much going on right now. Have you tried losing the speech bubbles and consolidating the type into one or two of the blocks? If you did that, you could use the extra space to add another photo. Good luck!