party invitations - FIRST CAKE

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Danielle Haramut
  • Minted Apr 6, 2014
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This clean and modern full photo first birthday invite will be sure to get your guests attention.

tags:

party invitations, clean modern full photo one cake

colors shown:

white red

fonts:

Raleway Thin, Walkway Black, Chopin Script

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 01 2015

Edited on:

Mar 10 2015

average score:

2.22

comments:

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party invitations - FIRST CAKE by Danielle Haramut

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Danielle Haramut on Mar 1, 2015 at 11:13am
Danielle Haramut
  • Minted Apr 6, 2014
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which photo do you like the best? any other comments welcomed!

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Chris Griffith on Mar 9, 2015 at 7:47pm
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B is the best to me.

Shari Margolin on Mar 10, 2015 at 4:42am
Shari Margolin
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I'd love to see Option A with the kerning on the script set to 0!

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Ellis on Mar 8, 2015 at 7:05pm
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I like the new layout, B.

Shirley Lin Schneider on Mar 9, 2015 at 12:11am
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I like B....clean and legible

Shari Margolin on Mar 9, 2015 at 4:15am
Shari Margolin
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I like B the best but I think the copy is a little tough to read. I'd recommend using a thicker/more contrasty face for everything other than "one" - maybe try a script for the first cake part, and a heavier sans or serif face for the details?

CaroleeXpressions on Mar 9, 2015 at 7:15am
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My choice would be B. The bottom of the picture is very busy making it hard to read type. Maybe try putting a gradient white screen coming up from the bottom. 100% to 0%. Just a thought!

Chris Griffith on Mar 9, 2015 at 8:14am
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I love the changes in B

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Chris Griffith on Mar 6, 2015 at 5:18pm
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I like the way A fits over the photo better. In B the N cloaks the little girl and it is not as sweet as A

Stacey Meacham on Mar 7, 2015 at 3:44pm
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I chose B, but I can't decide if you need the ONE or not. Did you try just the ONE without the come celebrate? I might try ONE in the same font as come celebrate is lower case (still large over the photo like you have it in white) and try, Isabella's first cake also in that font, lower case as well, but keep the red. It just feels too complex to me as is. I think it will be even stronger with some editing.

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Monica Schafer on Mar 2, 2015 at 9:06pm
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B for me. :)

Bob Daly on Mar 3, 2015 at 3:23am
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I like the color in b

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CaroleeXpressions on Mar 1, 2015 at 1:56pm
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Danielle, I love this concept and I like both C & D. Something makes me want to see her whole face fit inside the arch of the N. Also I would like to see her hands free of type. So maybe move the first 2 lines up just a little and try the address and rsvp on one line and keep the date & time where they are. Just a few thoughts to try!!

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