party invitations - Jolie's No-Shoes V4

Tags: party invitations, 1960s, retro, rainbow, socks, shoes, feet, beach

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Jill Okihiro
  • Minted Dec 29, 2013
  • 77 Comments made
  • 2602 Votes cast

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This is a retro photo card in the feel of the 1960's to invite someone to a colorful birthday party.

tags:

party invitations, 1960s, retro, rainbow, socks, shoes, feet, beach

colors shown:

pale yellow, aquamarine green, sky blue, blue, light purple, beige, pink, mauve

fonts:

knockout, Adobe Garamond Pro, Bender, Intrepid

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Feb 25 2015

Edited on:

Mar 07 2015

average score:

1.53

comments:

0

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party invitations - Jolie's No-Shoes V4 by Jill Okihiro

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Jill Okihiro on Feb 27, 2015 at 6:28am
Jill Okihiro
  • Minted Dec 29, 2013
  • 77 Comments made
  • 2602 Votes cast

Thank you for comments ~ appreciated and acknowledged!! This Vsn lightened the waves behind the main text, and lessened the variety of colors of the information so the eye does not "bounce" around and reads hopefully more clearly.

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Jill Okihiro on Feb 25, 2015 at 2:24pm
Jill Okihiro
  • Minted Dec 29, 2013
  • 77 Comments made
  • 2602 Votes cast

Version 2 was simpler and gets rid of the banner above the child's head, moving it to the right. Some slight color and font size changes were made too to make it less cluttered.

Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Feb 26, 2015 at 1:40am
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
  • Minted Mar 26, 2011
  • 182 Awards
  • 4643 Comments made
  • 45291 Votes cast

Hi Jill, this is a very fun idea for a party! My only suggestion is that the wave pattern behind the text is a bit distracting . . . maybe if you lighten it up just a bit more so that it doesn't compete with the text.

Loree Mayer on Feb 26, 2015 at 1:04pm
Loree Mayer
  • Minted Oct 3, 2011
  • 26 Awards
  • 478 Comments made
  • 43073 Votes cast

Fun idea! The pattern is definitely busy behind the text. You may not even need all those waves?

Danielle Haramut on Feb 26, 2015 at 3:21pm
Danielle Haramut
  • Minted Apr 6, 2014
  • 351 Comments made
  • 4568 Votes cast

very cute idea! i also think the waves behind the test is very distracting - what if you took out the grey and green wave?

Version 1 - submitted on Feb 25 2015 - no comments