birth announcements - The Gentle Treatment

Tags: birth announcements, original icons, stripe, band, ribbon

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roxanne chang
  • Minted Sep 4, 2009
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comments from Roxanne:

Put all the focus on your sweet little newborn with this simple card.

tags:

birth announcements, original icons, stripe, band, ribbon

colors shown:

softest teal

fonts:

Feel Script, Candara

design inspired by:

Square Birth Announcement Photo Card

submitted on:

Jun 22 2011

Edited on:

Jun 26 2011

average score:

2.39

comments:

3

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birth announcements - The Gentle Treatment by roxanne chang

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roxanne chang on Jun 26, 2011 at 11:30am
roxanne chang
  • Minted Sep 4, 2009
  • 1 Award
  • 70 Comments made
  • 4204 Votes cast

Thanks for the great comments. I played around with the sizing and spacing. Also, I moved the parents' line down to the bottom. Hopefully, you all like the changes!

Inkblot Paper on Jun 26, 2011 at 9:37pm
Inkblot Paper
  • Minted May 11, 2010
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I like the changes...and the spaceing looks good ;)

Wendy Van Ryn on Jun 28, 2011 at 5:40pm
Wendy Van Ryn
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love the icons at the bottom, nice touch :-)

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Inkblot Paper on Jun 24, 2011 at 9:59am
Inkblot Paper
  • Minted May 11, 2010
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I love your little symbols and the glow effect of the 'Christopher James'. I think that you could work a bit on the spacing. For example the 21" seems a bit close to the ruler and I’d like to see a bit more breathing space around the ‘Christopher James’. Maybe also scale down the stats text.

Ann Gardner on Jun 24, 2011 at 3:09pm
Ann Gardner
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To me "Introducing" is kind of hanging off by itself. I'd play around with the type a bit at the top.