wedding stationery - love sparrows

Tags: wedding stationery, clean, modern, simple, birds, tree

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Colleen Garrison
  • Minted Dec 16, 2008
  • 35 Comments made
  • 603 Votes cast

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comments from Colleen:

A simple, clean, and modern invite

tags:

wedding stationery, clean, modern, simple, birds, tree

colors shown:

green, blue, and white

fonts:

perpetua

design inspired by:

Jessica & Judd

submitted on:

Jan 28 2009

Edited on:

Feb 05 2009

average score:

2.08

comments:

8

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wedding stationery - love sparrows by Colleen Garrison

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Colleen Garrison on Jan 28, 2009 at 2:52pm
Colleen Garrison
  • Minted Dec 16, 2008
  • 35 Comments made
  • 603 Votes cast

critque is appreciated :)

Colleen Garrison on Jan 28, 2009 at 2:53pm
Colleen Garrison
  • Minted Dec 16, 2008
  • 35 Comments made
  • 603 Votes cast

oops I mean critique lol

Phil on Jan 29, 2009 at 12:21pm

More contrast between the background and text might be helpful. Maybe add a semi-transparent overlay banner along the top and put the text on top of this. Also, perhaps some variance in the font.

Colleen Garrison on Jan 30, 2009 at 7:46am
Colleen Garrison
  • Minted Dec 16, 2008
  • 35 Comments made
  • 603 Votes cast

I like this much better. Thank you for your imput! :)

Colleen Garrison on Jan 30, 2009 at 7:49am
Colleen Garrison
  • Minted Dec 16, 2008
  • 35 Comments made
  • 603 Votes cast

thats INPUT he he he

koshi on Feb 2, 2009 at 5:09pm
koshi
  • Minted Aug 28, 2008
  • 22 Awards
  • 95 Comments made
  • 925 Votes cast

Cool tree! The brown band on the yellow-green looks sorta muddy, and the script type running over the branches is a little busy. I actually feel like the brown band takes away from what would otherwise be a wonderfully simple design.

Fresh Press Invitations on Feb 4, 2009 at 6:27am
Fresh Press Invitations
  • Minted Jan 8, 2009
  • 4 Comments made
  • 80 Votes cast

I love the simple design of the tree, but to me the text on the bottom shouldn't be running over the design. Maybe if you moved it to the right, made it right justified, and broke it down to a few more lines of text then it would look a little more balanced.

Guess What Design Studio on Feb 6, 2009 at 9:06am
Guess What Design Studio
  • Minted May 6, 2008
  • 139 Awards
  • 6268 Comments made
  • 19014 Votes cast

I really love the tree and birds - great color palette, too! :)