birth announcements - Little Addition

Tags: birth announcements, First Child, Birth, Baby, Pink, Addition, Grey, Add, Equals, Dots

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Camille Kirch
  • Minted Mar 19, 2010
  • 20 Comments made
  • 2303 Votes cast

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This is a great first child announcement featuring one landscape photo to welcome your new addition.

tags:

birth announcements, First Child, Birth, Baby, Pink, Addition, Grey, Add, Equals, Dots

colors shown:

Grey, Pink

fonts:

Century Gothic, FFF Tusj Bold

design inspired by:

A7 Landscape Birth Announcement Photo Card

submitted on:

Jun 08 2011

Edited on:

Jun 11 2011

average score:

1.96

comments:

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birth announcements - Little Addition by Camille Kirch

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Sam F. on Jun 11, 2011 at 6:05pm
Sam F.
  • Minted May 17, 2011
  • 28 Comments made
  • 13 Votes cast

typography is a bit better..i would keep playing with it. maybe try putting the top line of text all on the right hand side of the image. it would give the picture some breathing room. right now it feels a little squished between the top & bottom type. also, maybe a little bit of room between the "nolan <3 lily..." and the "1+1=3". the "nolan <3 lily" is very 'light' feeling because the weight of the text is pretty low, but the heart feels heavier since it's a solid object, it might be good to separate it a little from the line of text above it. these are all just opinions though-take it with a grain of salt ;)

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Sam F. on Jun 8, 2011 at 6:18pm
Sam F.
  • Minted May 17, 2011
  • 28 Comments made
  • 13 Votes cast

cute idea! but a little hard to read the text at the top where it covers over the baby's head.

Potluck Design on Jun 8, 2011 at 7:56pm
Potluck Design
  • Minted May 4, 2011
  • 15 Comments made
  • 1941 Votes cast

I think I would do a heart instead of a + do to the fact I got lost on the idea of bad math. Cute idea either way and I do like the type and font selection.

Noma and Dolly on Jun 10, 2011 at 10:52am
Noma and Dolly
  • Minted Mar 18, 2011
  • 3 Awards
  • 124 Comments made
  • 3852 Votes cast

cute! i agree about the type on the baby's head...maybe just adjust it to 2-3 lines and keep it in the upper right corner and shrink the size of the grey dots a bit. i would also suggest to make the parents' line the same font as the baby's, but keep it grey because that is a great balance! :) one more thing! maybe also shrink the whole bottom portion a bit and scoot it down so as to not be on the baby's face...ok i'm done. ;)

Camille Kirch on Jun 11, 2011 at 5:23pm
Camille Kirch
  • Minted Mar 19, 2010
  • 20 Comments made
  • 2303 Votes cast

Thank you for your comments! I changed a few things up.