birth announcements - Quite a Pair!

Tags: birth announcements, fresh,modern,twin births,

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Nazia Hyder
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A fresh & modern design featuring twin births,with a pun intended :)

tags:

birth announcements, fresh,modern,twin births,

colors shown:

chartreuse, magenta

fonts:

frontage,melany lane,josefin slab

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Birth Announcement

submitted on:

Dec 09 2014

Edited on:

Dec 29 2014

average score:

2.47

comments:

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birth announcements - Quite a Pair! by Nazia Hyder

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Nazia Hyder on Dec 10, 2014 at 11:19am
Nazia Hyder
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Any feedback is much appreciated.

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Ria Sharon on Dec 29, 2014 at 6:26pm
Ria Sharon
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Love the concept!

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Anupama on Dec 18, 2014 at 7:11pm
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I like A

Robin L. Andrews on Dec 20, 2014 at 11:05am
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B. difficult call but i went with the sightly brighter colors.

Holly Whitcomb on Dec 29, 2014 at 5:49pm
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B for me!

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Lori Wemple on Dec 12, 2014 at 2:10pm
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so cute!! I think I would just even out the space of the text above and below the lines, so there is an equal amount (i.e., move the weight / length info down a tad so it's the same distance from the line, as the name is - hope that makes sense! :)

Erica Krystek on Dec 12, 2014 at 3:46pm
Erica Krystek
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Missed the poll, but this is cute! Just a quick note that the bottom black type under Sasha's name appears slightly off center ;)

Angela Thompson on Dec 12, 2014 at 7:12pm
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I loved the first colour combo you had , the lime and grape !That's what got me when I first saw it. I think its a really sweet design.

Amy Kross on Dec 13, 2014 at 9:55am
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Really sweet! I do think prefer your original color combination. And I would increase the size of the "These two are quite a pair" message and possibly have it arc to surround the top and bottom of your cute illustrations.

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Keen Peachy on Dec 12, 2014 at 11:35am
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a for me!

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Melissa Casey on Dec 11, 2014 at 7:31am
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CUTE!! Love the foil look so it appeals to various gender combos! For me (maybe it's just me?) on my monitor the text in black all looks "grainy" / pixilated. The purple text is perfect tho which is weird. I might suggest to enlarge the stats text a touch. Also, for the "stats" lines, it looks like it's centered more to the right than left, making it off center, so just might want to center that :)

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Melissa Casey on Dec 10, 2014 at 11:35am
Melissa Casey
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The script is really hard to read. I'd enlarge all the text but Logan and Sasha. The design could be a touch bigger too.