party invitations - Oh What Fun

Tags: party invitations, green, blue, orange, fun, birthday, one, stripes, whimsy, cute

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Sarah Tarantino
  • Minted Mar 6, 2014
  • 13 Comments made
  • 121 Votes cast

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This colorful, gender neutral design featuring stripes, fun fonts, and a cute rhyme brings whimsy to your little one's party invitations.

tags:

party invitations, green, blue, orange, fun, birthday, one, stripes, whimsy, cute

colors shown:

Orange, Teal, Sage

fonts:

American Typewriter, Academy Engraved, Honey Script

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Invitation

submitted on:

Mar 11 2014

average score:

1.52

comments:

5

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party invitations - Oh What Fun by Sarah Tarantino

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Sarah Tarantino on Mar 11, 2014 at 4:01pm
Sarah Tarantino
  • Minted Mar 6, 2014
  • 13 Comments made
  • 121 Votes cast

Hey Everyone! Thoughts? I'm wondering if this looks too busy?

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Mar 11, 2014 at 5:18pm
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
  • Minted Mar 26, 2011
  • 197 Awards
  • 4677 Comments made
  • 47593 Votes cast

Great color choices .... love the rhyme .... but the layout/typography is a bit hard to read. Maybe try a version where the text flows in one direction and the party details can be in another. The font you've chosen for the party details at the bottom is also a bit difficult to read, you can probably increase the stroke a bit.

Lori Wemple on Mar 13, 2014 at 4:38pm
Lori Wemple
  • Minted Nov 19, 2011
  • 426 Awards
  • 4760 Comments made
  • 11728 Votes cast

I like your colors and pattern but I think I would simplify the copy just a bit; and the type at the bottom is too light to read I think - just my opinion :)

freckle fish on Mar 21, 2014 at 7:23am
freckle fish
  • Minted Oct 4, 2011
  • 2 Awards
  • 28 Comments made
  • 3142 Votes cast

like the stripes and colors. the type is a bit confusing. maybe try to simplify it.

Katherine Soares on Mar 23, 2014 at 9:47am
Katherine Soares
  • Minted Sep 19, 2013
  • 39 Comments made
  • 419 Votes cast

Love the color choices and the outside boarder is great but having so many lines/dots on the inside breaks it up in a weird way for me. It's also tough to read that bottom line of text, the rhyme is really cute though!