party invitations - Sixteen Magazine Cover

Tags: party invitations, Magazine cover, fashion, Hollywood

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  • Minted Jul 18, 2010
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comments from Jonell:

For the fashion conscious, Hollywood following sixteen year old.

tags:

party invitations, Magazine cover, fashion, Hollywood

colors shown:

purple, pink, white,

fonts:

Blue Highway, Arsis, Girls R Weird

design inspired by:

Sweet Sixteen

submitted on:

Aug 07 2010

Edited on:

Aug 07 2010

average score:

1.47

comments:

3

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The Picture Portal on Aug 7, 2010 at 12:29pm
The Picture Portal
  • Minted Jul 18, 2010
  • 1 Award
  • 4 Comments made
  • 149 Votes cast

Thank you for catching my spelling faux pas!

Valerie on Aug 7, 2010 at 1:41pm

Too much purple! The font not only blends in with the dress but the color overwhelms the entire page, and therefore diminishes the overall effect I think you're after. "Julianna" needs to be bigger - it disappears between the headline and the by-line (Style star...). I might consider losing the quotation marks around "Come dressed to impress" and change placement as the white disappears into her hair. I would agree with previous comment about losing some of the tiny stars. I do like the one star beneath the S - the rest is perhaps overkill. It's a great idea but definitely tricky to get all the text in over and around the photo. If it's going out as a folded card maybe the "Come Dressed to Impress" could go on the inside?

Stacie on Aug 9, 2010 at 8:17am

This looks just like the Seventeen Mag. I love it!

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Jill Means on Aug 7, 2010 at 11:57am
Jill Means
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I like the concept! - I think it needs a little refinement. "You're Invited" is spelled wrong. I would eliminate the small stars (it doesn't need them) also the "come dressed to impress" should be moved down so the quotes aren't so high on her neck I think.