baby shower invitations - What Will It BEE?

Tags: baby shower invitations, Honeycomb, Hive, Bee

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Samantha
  • Minted Oct 2, 2011
  • 15 Comments made
  • 229 Votes cast

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A Honeycomb background with a bee hive text box, gender neutral

tags:

baby shower invitations, Honeycomb, Hive, Bee

colors shown:

Yellow and Gray

fonts:

Baskerville Old Face, French Script

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Oct 15 2013

Edited on:

Oct 15 2013

average score:

1.95

comments:

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Samantha on Sep 27, 2013 at 3:55pm
Samantha
  • Minted Oct 2, 2011
  • 15 Comments made
  • 229 Votes cast

Please help me make this design work, any suggestions?

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Version 3 - submitted on Oct 10 2013 - no comments

Version 2 (poll) - submitted on Sep 27 2013 - hide

Jazmin B. Marquez on Sep 28, 2013 at 6:50am
Jazmin B. Marquez
  • Minted Sep 25, 2013
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  • 358 Comments made
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I prefer this one.

Megan Elgin on Sep 29, 2013 at 7:56am
Megan Elgin
  • Minted Nov 14, 2010
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Option a.. The gender reveal sentence is hard to read when it's broken up by the larger bee on the other one. What about using a second, more whimsical font for some of the information to break things up a little? Right now I think most of the info is just there and doesn't add anything to the design... It needs a little oomph. Your bee and honeycomb graphics are really cute!

Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Oct 4, 2013 at 2:54am
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
  • Minted Mar 26, 2011
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Option A is alot easier to read but I do think you should use a more straight font, something clean and simple like Futura etc.

Milk and Marrow on Oct 7, 2013 at 10:31pm
Milk and Marrow
  • Minted Oct 4, 2013
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Option A is easier to read, though the text feels a little tight. Maybe reduce contrast between the two hive colors and/or try some bolder or skinnier fonts? Or even pull some of the info out of the hive (like rsvp or registry). :)

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Samantha on Sep 27, 2013 at 3:05pm
Samantha
  • Minted Oct 2, 2011
  • 15 Comments made
  • 229 Votes cast

Suggestions and Feedback would be VERY helpful!