save the date cards - our day is coming

Tags: save the date cards, swirls, vintage, pretty, elegant

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Neeta Sawhney
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comments from Harpreet:

This save the date is for the couple who likes the vintage touch of class

tags:

save the date cards, swirls, vintage, pretty, elegant

colors shown:

black, white

fonts:

josefin slab courier new bold

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Sep 09 2013

Edited on:

Sep 09 2013

average score:

1.79

comments:

2

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save the date cards - our day is coming by Neeta Sawhney

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Sep 9, 2013 at 5:53pm
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I really like all the changes Neeta. You should get more feedback from other designers, just for a second opinion ... I'm sure that they would be more than willing to give advice.

Sandra Picco Design on Sep 9, 2013 at 6:40pm
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nice changes, Neeta.

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Sep 9, 2013 at 5:02pm
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Neeta, what about reducing all the text that comes below the couples names to the same size as the 'ARE TYING THE KNOT' ... it should all flow since that are all the same font. Nice work on the names by the way.

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Sep 9, 2013 at 12:54pm
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I agree that the 'ON' should be made smaller Neeta. I also think that if you decide to leave the names BOLD the the location shouldn't be. Also A lovely script font would look nice for the names also.

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Neeta Sawhney on Sep 9, 2013 at 11:40am
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I tried two differ shapes to see what would give more definition please comment

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Neeta Sawhney on Sep 9, 2013 at 11:34am
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Here is all the designs revised and corrected please comment thanks Neeta

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Neeta Sawhney on Sep 9, 2013 at 10:20am
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please help me decide which one you like and do not hesitate to give me feedback. I feel it is critical to get constructive comments thank you Neeta

Christina Novak on Sep 9, 2013 at 10:41am
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I prefer the typography of A and like the border of B. Do you think the border is high res enough when printed?

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Neeta Sawhney on Sep 9, 2013 at 8:49am
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Please look at the new version of our day has come. I have changed the font and left the elements as such. Comments welcome thanks

JaxRobyn on Sep 9, 2013 at 9:04am
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Sans serif font is easier on the eyes. You might want to try making "ON" smaller and "save the date" bigger

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Sandra Picco Design on Sep 6, 2013 at 12:04pm
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your graphics are pretty and I love the black and white. I would try some different fonts. There is a list in the forum of free ones that you could play around with. http://www.minted.com/forum/comments.php?DiscussionID=1210&page=1#Item_17

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Sep 3, 2013 at 2:21pm
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I like B.

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JaxRobyn on Sep 3, 2013 at 12:54pm
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I like (B), but you could also try writing PLEASE in all caps or on a path

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Sep 2, 2013 at 7:01pm
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Hi Neeta, I would lose the 'Please' and 'Invitation to Follow' and just focus on the rest of the text. Also, The pattern at the base seems more defined than the top ... I think it would look lovely if you tried it at the top also.

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