save the date cards - Finally

Tags: save the date cards, Finally, modern, overlay

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Fran Gulick
  • Minted Aug 5, 2013
  • 31 Comments made
  • 121 Votes cast

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Your friends and family have supported you for a long time, let them know the time has finally come to celebrate you as a couple with this fun and modern save the date.

tags:

save the date cards, Finally, modern, overlay

colors shown:

white, coral

fonts:

Lato, Hipster Pro

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Sep 03 2013

average score:

2.50

comments:

3

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save the date cards - Finally by Fran Gulick

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Fran Gulick on Sep 4, 2013 at 9:31am
Fran Gulick
  • Minted Aug 5, 2013
  • 31 Comments made
  • 121 Votes cast

Wording still feels a little awkward - Any comments appreciated!

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Keen Peachy on Sep 4, 2013 at 1:09pm
Keen Peachy
  • Minted Feb 28, 2013
  • 59 Awards
  • 1181 Comments made
  • 78809 Votes cast

I really like your "finally" text..it looks great with the color. I think I would simplify the rest of the text and eliminate some of the words. Give it a little more space between lines and maybe see if you can use a more even font. This one looks like it has slight thicks and thins, which may be hurting readability.

South City Press on Sep 5, 2013 at 9:02am
South City Press
  • Minted Jun 11, 2013
  • 2 Awards
  • 179 Comments made
  • 5656 Votes cast

Love this! Did you try capitalizing the F in "Finally"? You could also simplify "So save their date and join the party" to just "Save the Date" to reduce the clutter a bit.