personal stationery - Nautical Notes

Tags: personal stationery, Waves, Ocean, Boat

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About Jocelyn

Jocelyn
  • Minted Jun 2, 2013
  • 9 Comments made
  • 334 Votes cast

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This nautical stationary combines both whimsy and elegance in a timeless and ageless design.

tags:

personal stationery, Waves, Ocean, Boat

colors shown:

Gold, Grey, Blue

fonts:

Neutraface Display

design inspired by:

A2 Non-Photo Stationery

submitted on:

Jul 30 2013

Edited on:

Jul 30 2013

average score:

2.51

comments:

3

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personal stationery - Nautical Notes by Jocelyn

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Jocelyn on Jul 30, 2013 at 11:06am
Jocelyn
  • Minted Jun 2, 2013
  • 9 Comments made
  • 334 Votes cast

Any kind of feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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An-Lon Chen on Jul 30, 2013 at 2:06pm
An-Lon Chen
  • Minted Jun 28, 2013
  • 1 Award
  • 238 Comments made
  • 3784 Votes cast

Love the new version - the earlier commentators who suggested splitting out the anchor were right!

Becky Nimoy on Jul 30, 2013 at 2:32pm
Becky Nimoy
  • Minted Mar 29, 2011
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  • 31166 Votes cast

looks great; love the changes

Carol Fazio on Jul 30, 2013 at 5:45pm
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
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I like what you're doing here, but I still think the name is lost. What about making it just Jocelyn and making it at least 20% smaller and trying it in the gray? I'd try a version at the bottom as well.

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Carol Fazio on Jul 30, 2013 at 12:37pm
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
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hi jocelyn, I really love the top portion of your design! I would probably eliminate the bottom monogram so the recipient can focus on writing down there. I would suggest putting the name up top small to the left of the boat. good luck!

Becky Nimoy on Jul 30, 2013 at 12:43pm
Becky Nimoy
  • Minted Mar 29, 2011
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looks better; i still think you can create two separate submissions using one with what carol said and you could submit your monogram on its own.

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Becky Nimoy on Jul 30, 2013 at 12:11pm
Becky Nimoy
  • Minted Mar 29, 2011
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  • 1302 Comments made
  • 31166 Votes cast

i think you have two separate designs here that you could use. one with the monogram and anchor circle and the other with the waves and boat. drop the line. they would be much stronger.