personal stationery - At the Cove

Tags: personal stationery, Watercolor, Ocean, Beach

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From Tiffany
  • Minted May 31, 2013
  • 57 Comments made
  • 1061 Votes cast

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comments from Tiffany:

A simple watercolor with hues of an ocean scene makes this stationary a breeze to work with.

tags:

personal stationery, Watercolor, Ocean, Beach

colors shown:

Blue, Yellow, Green

fonts:

Walkway Condensed

design inspired by:

A2 Photo Stationery

submitted on:

Jul 29 2013

Edited on:

Jul 29 2013

average score:

2.52

comments:

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personal stationery - At the Cove by From Tiffany

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From Tiffany on Jul 28, 2013 at 6:14pm
From Tiffany
  • Minted May 31, 2013
  • 57 Comments made
  • 1061 Votes cast

Any feedback much appreciated.

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Version 5 (poll) - submitted on Jul 29 2013 - hide

Carol Fazio on Jul 29, 2013 at 9:53am
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
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I like the positioning on the right, but would you consider knocking the type out to white so it's easier to read and open up the tracking a bit? You might need to go smaller or move it down a bit. A sans serif might be easier to read too.

Marabou Design on Jul 29, 2013 at 10:38am
Marabou Design
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Have you considered changing the text to white?

From Tiffany on Jul 29, 2013 at 11:04am
From Tiffany
  • Minted May 31, 2013
  • 57 Comments made
  • 1061 Votes cast

Thanks everyone for the suggestions. I initially tried making the text white but you couldn't see it at all against the yellow and I don't want to touch the background. I personally like the name on the right but I can't place it further down because of the guide requirements. Ill look into a sans serif or tracking the letters more. Thanks again for the feedback I REALLY appreciate it!

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Monica Bergler on Jul 28, 2013 at 6:56pm
Monica Bergler
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Love the colors and the softness of color stripes. The box around the name seems hard compared to the color stripes. Maybe try it without the box or with a softer shape.

Carol Fazio on Jul 29, 2013 at 5:32am
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
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Hi Tiffany, I agree about the box. I'd try multiplying it so it's not on top of the waves or deleting it altogether. The waves are beautiful! I'd also move the name down, make it smaller and center it as another option. just my two cents here.

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