greeting card - mom, mom, mommy

Tags: greeting card, mom, boys, mother's day, name, love, modern, carol fazio

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Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
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some days you could rip your hair out if you hear the word 'mommy' one more time, but on Mother's Day it is music to your ears!

tags:

greeting card, mom, boys, mother's day, name, love, modern, carol fazio

colors shown:

mint, blueberry

fonts:

Bebas Neue, Adobe Caslon

design inspired by:

Birthday Card

submitted on:

Feb 21 2013

Edited on:

Feb 22 2013

average score:

2.03

comments:

2

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greeting card - mom, mom, mommy by Carol Fazio

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Carol Fazio on Feb 21, 2013 at 7:13pm
Carol Fazio
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mom, mom, mommy...comments welcome! Attaching an alternate colorway.

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Lori Wemple on Feb 22, 2013 at 12:23pm
Lori Wemple
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Love the updates!

Monica Schafer on Feb 22, 2013 at 6:12pm
Monica Schafer
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Changes look awesome! Love this Carol.

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Carol Fazio on Feb 22, 2013 at 9:09am
Carol Fazio
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Thanks for your help on this one, everyone! What do you think? I added the rule around the outside because the preview is not showing up. Hopefully it will be fixed soon!

Chris Griffith on Feb 22, 2013 at 10:18am
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Love the changes!

Lori Wemple on Feb 22, 2013 at 11:36am
Lori Wemple
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This lookout looks great - much better! Just a thought - what if you add some space on each side of 'love' at the bottom; then you can lose the comma and it will spread the copy out a bit

Stacey Meacham on Feb 22, 2013 at 11:45am
Stacey Meacham
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Hi Carol, sorry I am late to the game. i like what you've done burt I agree with Lori, it feels a little tight on the smaller text, maybe a little breathing room up top and bottom, maybe just making the font smaller will help. Otherwise great job.

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Chris Griffith on Feb 21, 2013 at 10:10pm
Chris Griffith
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Carol, love the words and the concept. Wondering what it would look like if you moved the MOM to the left and moved the happy mother's day, love graceson & krista to to the right a bit so it is still overlapping. Not sure if that works but somehow what you have now makes the photo seem too long.

Lori Wemple on Feb 22, 2013 at 6:46am
Lori Wemple
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it's super funny Carol! :) and I definitely have those days ;) I feel the balance of the large 'mom' throws me just a little -- what if it were smaller, and above the line 'some days' so it reads 'mom'... some days you might want to change your name....? just a thought

Kim Dietrich Elam on Feb 22, 2013 at 7:06am
Kim Dietrich Elam
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Love your concept, Carol! I agree with the other comments regarding the overall balance. Maybe a vertical layout would be more balanced - with "Mom" at the top, then "some days...," then photo, and greeting at the bottom? Good luck! :)