birth announcements - Twin Watercolour

Tags: birth announcements, watercolour, dots, handdrawn, linen, fabric, texture

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Jordan Bariesheff
  • Minted Nov 7, 2012
  • 3 Awards
  • 286 Comments made
  • 12572 Votes cast

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comments from the designer:

This neutral photo birth announcement is as precious as your new twin babies are. The soft watercolours are a pretty neutral for any combination of gender.

tags:

birth announcements, watercolou r, dots, handdrawn, linen, fabric, texture

colors shown:

beige, blue, pink, green, lemon, purple

fonts:

futura, goudy old style

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Birth Announcement

submitted on:

Jan 03 2013

Edited on:

Jan 04 2013

average score:

2.86

comments:

3

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birth announcements - Twin Watercolour by Jordan Bariesheff

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Jordan Bariesheff on Jan 4, 2013 at 6:43pm
Jordan Bariesheff
  • Minted Nov 7, 2012
  • 3 Awards
  • 286 Comments made
  • 12572 Votes cast

thanks so much for the feedback Stacey! I had two versions for the background, I think you're right - looks more fresh with white! : )

Ann Gardner on Jan 4, 2013 at 7:18pm
Ann Gardner
  • Minted Feb 22, 2010
  • 115 Awards
  • 1631 Comments made
  • 120237 Votes cast

I LOVE your background illustration! The type feels a bit tight in the white space. Have you thought about closing up some of the space between the name, date and info so that the type doesn't run over your confetti?

Jennifer Wick on Jan 7, 2013 at 5:06am
Jennifer Wick
  • Minted Sep 2, 2010
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I adore the watercolor dots! I might suggest cropping the photo more horizontally and extending it to the edges. And on what Ann said, I think if the name/date/weight info was brought up closer to the 12th may 2013 line and put in a light san serif type (like futura) I think it will marry the type better with the lovely light, modern feel of this : )

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Kelsey Clanton on Jan 3, 2013 at 9:24pm
Kelsey Clanton
  • Minted Jan 28, 2012
  • 6 Awards
  • 163 Comments made
  • 8703 Votes cast

Love the texture!!

Stacey Meacham on Jan 4, 2013 at 4:43am
Stacey Meacham
  • Minted Sep 3, 2011
  • 161 Awards
  • 4117 Comments made
  • 48014 Votes cast

This is just stunning, has amazing potential. Maybe you could add a heart icon in the gray between the baby names and weight or a "J" for their last name. It's just kind of standing out to me right now empty as it is. I think this would be amazing a fresh white background too with not photo border. Just my 2 cents. Also, center the names vertically between the 2 lines.

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