personal stationery - Down By The Bay

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24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
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Inspired by the classic children's song this whimsy, non-photo stationery is gender neutral and super cute!!

tags:

personal stationery, kids, simple, cute, fresh, unique, classic, whimsy, kids, stationery , boy, girl blue, aqua, pink, purple, orange, yellow, green, 24th and Dune

colors shown:

blue, aqua, pink, purple, orange, yellow, green

fonts:

populaire

design inspired by:

A2 Non-Photo Stationery

submitted on:

Jul 23 2012

Edited on:

Jul 25 2012

average score:

3.34

comments:

3

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personal stationery - Down By The Bay by 24th and Dune

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Stacey Hill on Jul 26, 2012 at 1:05pm
Stacey Hill
  • Minted Mar 17, 2011
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I agree with Carol - I think I prefer the tail only version but I think the type treatment is better now for sure. Cute!

Stacey Meacham on Jul 27, 2012 at 5:58am
Stacey Meacham
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Adorable. I prefer this new version.

Carol Fazio on Aug 1, 2012 at 7:32pm
Carol Fazio
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I love how this turned out! Very cute, love the water!

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24th and Dune on Jul 24, 2012 at 1:36pm
24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
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How do we feel about this version?

Elizabeth Victoria Designs on Jul 24, 2012 at 1:36pm
Elizabeth Victoria Designs
  • Minted Sep 17, 2010
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Maybe a spout on top of the whale's head? And agree with the font being smaller. Really cute!

Carol Fazio on Jul 24, 2012 at 2:45pm
Carol Fazio
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this is cute and I love the spots on the tail! but personally, I liked just the tail because I saw mermaid rather than whale, like she had just dove off.

Christina Novak on Jul 24, 2012 at 5:38pm
Christina Novak
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love!

Smeeta Sharma on Jul 24, 2012 at 6:06pm
Smeeta Sharma
  • Minted Oct 28, 2010
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Oh I do like tho version. Also, maybe a spout like Elizabeth's suggestion.

Kelsey Clanton on Jul 24, 2012 at 8:33pm
Kelsey Clanton
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Love this! I love the name font! I agree with others that spouting water would be a good addition.

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24th and Dune on Jul 23, 2012 at 12:48pm
24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
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  • 22753 Votes cast

Really hoping this looks like a whale's tail, any suggestions are welcomed!! I'm still not 100% happy with this but I'm not sure if it's the type that's bothering me or the illustration.

Smeeta Sharma on Jul 23, 2012 at 7:56pm
Smeeta Sharma
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Oh Spotted whale's tail.. very cute. I do agree it feels like something's missing or needs to be tweaked. Have you tried it with a lightly coloured or textured background? I really love the colours and texture of the illustration!

Stacey Hill on Jul 24, 2012 at 6:33am
Stacey Hill
  • Minted Mar 17, 2011
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I think the font might be too heavy or big (or maybe it just needs a lighter colour) but I love the illustration!

Lori Wemple on Jul 24, 2012 at 6:36am
Lori Wemple
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I love this! very cute tail, and definitely reads as a whale. I think the font is just a tad too big - just my opinion, but I'd scale it down a tad. What about adding a drop / splash or two of water somewhere? just a thought :)

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