baby shower invitations - Ducks in a Row

Tags: baby shower invitations, ducks, illustration, baby, mother and father, vintage

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Shiny Penny Studio
  • Minted Jan 12, 2012
  • 16 Awards
  • 14 Comments made
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This 5.25"x 5.25" baby shower invite features a modern illustration of the ducks on string toy, representing the mother and father to be towing their baby egg on a vintage style layout.

tags:

baby shower invitations, ducks, illustrati on, baby, mother and father, vintage

colors shown:

yellow, pink, brown, green

fonts:

bebas, goudy old style

design inspired by:

5" x 7" Baby Shower

submitted on:

Mar 07 2012

Edited on:

Mar 10 2012

average score:

2.69

comments:

5

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baby shower invitations - Ducks in a Row by Shiny Penny Studio

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Sincerely Jackie on Mar 11, 2012 at 5:18am
Sincerely Jackie
  • Minted Nov 7, 2009
  • 16 Awards
  • 751 Comments made
  • 27209 Votes cast

Love all the changes you made to the design! this is by far the strongest of all three versions :)

Omar on Mar 11, 2012 at 7:16pm
Omar
  • Minted Jan 17, 2012
  • 28 Comments made
  • 353 Votes cast

i like how clean and crips it all looks. very sweet. 8)

Kim Dietrich Elam on Mar 13, 2012 at 7:33pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
  • Minted Feb 10, 2011
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cute!

Christina Novak on Mar 15, 2012 at 1:22pm
Christina Novak
  • Minted Nov 4, 2011
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love the revisions and the drawings.

Angela Marzuki on Mar 26, 2012 at 6:57am
Angela Marzuki
  • Minted May 24, 2011
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Love your illustration!

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24th and Dune on Mar 9, 2012 at 5:14pm
24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
  • 23 Awards
  • 888 Comments made
  • 21975 Votes cast

I love this concept! Super cute! A few things that would make it even better...I would play around with the text coloring. I'd love to see more of the blue to make it more baby and less somber. Maybe do the box blue with the white text and have the headline "lets help kim..." in that dark gray you used for the ducks eyes? I would also center the text, right now it looks like it's more on the right that the left. And the mommy duck, her beak isn't as defined as the daddy duck's. I really really do love this, clean & simple.

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Lea Delaveris on Mar 7, 2012 at 11:47am
Lea Delaveris
  • Minted Jun 17, 2010
  • 4 Awards
  • 760 Comments made
  • 15502 Votes cast

Very cute idea, but there is a lot going on right now. I think the design could be simplified a bit - nix the gray corners, keep the text within the green instead of overlapping the white - to make it a lot stronger.

Kimberly Morgan on Mar 7, 2012 at 11:59am
Kimberly Morgan
  • Minted Aug 2, 2009
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  • 2058 Comments made
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I agree with Lea. Simplify the background stuff so your illustration can shine.

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