moving announcements - cargo

Tags: moving announcements, moving, car, blue, green, simple

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carly reed
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a simple and sweet design to announce your move!

tags:

moving announcements, moving, car, blue, green, simple

colors shown:

seafoam

fonts:

business penmanship, aw conquer sans, bebas neue

design inspired by:

A2 Photo Moving Announcement

submitted on:

Jan 06 2012

Edited on:

Jan 17 2012

average score:

3.52

comments:

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moving announcements - cargo by carly reed

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carly reed on Jan 17, 2012 at 7:48am
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per kimberly's awesome suggestion (i agree the first line was pretty tight) i got rid of the word family and made the line a little bigger and made "new" pop more. thoughts?

Monica Schafer on Jan 17, 2012 at 9:26am
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This is very cute! Simple & charming with just enough detail to make it stand out. Love it. :)

The Factorie on Jan 18, 2012 at 9:36am
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Very nice!

Sarah Curry on Jan 18, 2012 at 1:30pm
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Very nice, Carly! Really like the new "new"... :)

Susan Brown on Jan 18, 2012 at 4:53pm
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I love this.

Kimberly FitzSimons on Jan 18, 2012 at 8:03pm
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This turned out so great!

Wendy Van Ryn on Jan 19, 2012 at 5:26pm
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very cute Carly!

guess what? on Jan 26, 2012 at 2:25am
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Cute, Carly! I love your little illustration! :)

Sandra Picco Design on Jan 26, 2012 at 8:55am
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Carly, I just saw your changes...this turned out great!

nocciola design on Mar 9, 2012 at 7:48pm
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congrats on your win!

Giselle Zimmerman on Mar 9, 2012 at 10:06pm
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Congrats ! this is so cute ;)

guess what? on Mar 10, 2012 at 2:48am
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Congratulations Carly! Love your little zoom zoom! :)

Lehan Veenker on Mar 10, 2012 at 6:49am
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Congrats on your win, Carly! :o)

Bonjour Paper on Mar 10, 2012 at 4:25pm
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Congrats Carly !! Nice job !

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carly reed on Jan 9, 2012 at 8:28am
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thanks, ladies! carol - the text already had a stroke but i did bump up the size a little to make it more readable. sandy - thanks so much for your suggestions, i took your advice and made some edits to balance everything out! what do you think?

Smeeta Sharma on Jan 9, 2012 at 5:37pm
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love this!

Kimberly FitzSimons on Jan 11, 2012 at 5:33am
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Carly, I love the simplicity of this design. I would definitely buy it! I think the first line is a little scrunched - especially the word "new". Have you tried putting "the new" on it's own line? It may not work, but thought I would offer the suggestion. Good luck!

Susan Crispell on Jan 14, 2012 at 3:08pm
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so cute!

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Carol Fazio on Jan 6, 2012 at 2:02pm
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cute illustration, but I am having a tough time reading the rest. Can you bump up the point size and maybe add a stroke?

Sandra Picco Design on Jan 6, 2012 at 9:06pm
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your illustration is great! Just a thought, but what about making the tail on "moved" go to the right instead and maybe leave it off the last line to create a bit more balance? Nicely done, though!

Inkblot Paper on Jan 8, 2012 at 6:56pm
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love this!

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