moving announcements - Highrise Hello

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hapamapa
  • Minted Nov 17, 2011
  • 22 Comments made
  • 1233 Votes cast

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This moving announcement highlights your new urban highrise home.

tags:

moving announcements, modern, urban, moving

colors shown:

Mustard, Carbon, White

fonts:

Cyclone, Gill Sans

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Moving Announcement

submitted on:

Jan 07 2012

Edited on:

Jan 15 2012

average score:

2.71

comments:

3

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moving announcements - Highrise Hello by hapamapa

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Up Up Creative on Jan 18, 2012 at 4:59pm
Up Up Creative
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like! abstract enough to be any city, and very cool.

Wendy Van Ryn on Jan 20, 2012 at 7:37am
Wendy Van Ryn
  • Minted May 13, 2011
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fun!

guess what? on Jan 24, 2012 at 7:23pm
guess what?
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Really like this! Cool! :)

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hapamapa on Jan 15, 2012 at 1:05am
hapamapa
  • Minted Nov 17, 2011
  • 22 Comments made
  • 1233 Votes cast

Thank you so much for the suggestions, Hailey and Olivia! Hailey, I decided to keep the city name at the top vs. hello because the stronger type looked better against the top edge (hope that makes sense). Tracked out the address text a little... Is it easier to read? I couldn't get the buildings to look right as just outlines so integrated outlines with the existing design. Any thoughts?

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hapamapa on Jan 7, 2012 at 1:20am
hapamapa
  • Minted Nov 17, 2011
  • 22 Comments made
  • 1233 Votes cast

The buildings were inspired by jenincmyk's save the date: http://www.minted.com/design-rating/44936 Too similar?

Snow and Ivy on Jan 7, 2012 at 9:30am
Snow and Ivy
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such a good idea! What if 'Hello' were above 'Chicago' - just so it read more literally? Also, it's hard to see the thin type at bottom right - maybe track it out a bit? Super cute. I think the buildings are a bit similar to Jen's, but what if you did more of a hand-drawn look... outlines of the buildings, with little square windows - sort of like the black and white cartoons... ziggy or something? And then the one little window could still be yellow ;)

Olivia Raufman on Jan 7, 2012 at 11:41am
Olivia Raufman
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I really like the Hello Chicago type treatment, but agree that the buildings are a bit too similar to Jen's. I love Hailey's suggestion of outlines.

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