wedding invitations - Stars Intertwined

Tags: wedding invitations, stars, Jewish, orange, blue

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Sami P
  • Minted Sep 20, 2011
  • 143 Comments made
  • 192 Votes cast

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This is religious invitation depicting Jewish 4-point stars overlapping and intertwining. A great invitation to show how you and your loved ones are connected to each other.

tags:

wedding invitations, stars, Jewish, orange, blue

colors shown:

Blue, Purple, Yellow, Orange

fonts:

Rockwell, Gill Sans

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Oct 29 2011

Edited on:

Oct 30 2011

average score:

1.89

comments:

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wedding invitations - Stars Intertwined by Sami P

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Sami P on Oct 30, 2011 at 8:58am
Sami P
  • Minted Sep 20, 2011
  • 143 Comments made
  • 192 Votes cast

Made a lot of changes this time.

Version 4 - submitted on Oct 29 2011 - hide

Carol Fazio on Oct 30, 2011 at 6:15am
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
  • 27 Awards
  • 6195 Comments made
  • 24808 Votes cast

Hi Sami, I like your edits. I would still choose one color for your type, one of the blues, and take the ampersand down in size. Try it with all the supporting copy in one weight and font, gill. You need a sturdy balance to all that's going on on the right.

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Carol Fazio on Oct 29, 2011 at 5:30pm
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
  • 27 Awards
  • 6195 Comments made
  • 24808 Votes cast

Hi Sami, I like the modern spin on the starcpattern and your colors, but it's a little overwhelming. I alsoI think you need to give your design more breathing room all the way around, especially on the right side. I would lose a couple of lines of copy and move it in from the right margin more.

Version 2 - submitted on Oct 29 2011 - no comments

Version 1 - submitted on Oct 29 2011 - no comments