wedding invitations - Vegas Skyline

Tags: wedding invitations, las vegas, skyline, lucky in love, modern, fun type, chic

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Janelle Otsuki
  • Minted Dec 10, 2010
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  • 40 Comments made
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This Las Vegas wedding invitation features an illustration of the vegas skyline along with fun, modern text.

tags:

wedding invitations, las vegas, skyline, lucky in love, modern, fun type, chic

colors shown:

black, white, pink

fonts:

futura, andes, wendy

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Oct 10 2011

Edited on:

Oct 16 2011

average score:

2.33

comments:

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wedding invitations - Vegas Skyline by Janelle Otsuki

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Karen Robert on Oct 19, 2011 at 10:22am
Karen Robert
  • Minted Oct 26, 2009
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cute!

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Janelle Otsuki on Oct 13, 2011 at 6:19pm
Janelle Otsuki
  • Minted Dec 10, 2010
  • 1 Award
  • 40 Comments made
  • 3674 Votes cast

I decided to go back to eccentric for the names.... and I tried both nothing and a line rule for the separation, but neither looked right.

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Janelle Otsuki on Oct 11, 2011 at 6:44pm
Janelle Otsuki
  • Minted Dec 10, 2010
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What do you think... still too much going on?

Carol Fazio on Oct 12, 2011 at 7:06am
Carol Fazio
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Janelle, I thinkg you're getting there, but I still think the dots are moving too much and compete with the stars and card symbols. What about thin grey or light pink solid rules instead - or nothing? I think the typeface for their names might be throwing me off too. How about using the non-fancy version of it for the first initial of their names?

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Oct 11, 2011 at 5:13am
Kim Dietrich Elam
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very cool!!! GREAT skyline.

Ana Gonzalez on Oct 11, 2011 at 5:57am
Ana Gonzalez
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Cool looking. But I would try having less elements. Maybe what divides information are lines.you have to make the skyline stand out!

Carol Fazio on Oct 11, 2011 at 9:24am
Carol Fazio
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I agree with Ana. The skyline is killer! I'd tone down some of the type too. Make that skyline the star!

Janelle Otsuki on Oct 11, 2011 at 9:34am
Janelle Otsuki
  • Minted Dec 10, 2010
  • 1 Award
  • 40 Comments made
  • 3674 Votes cast

Thanks for the advice girls! I'll work on toning down the type portion to make the skyline stand out more. I agree everything together is a bit much.

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