wedding invitations - Classic Coral

Tags: wedding invitations, beach, ocean, sea, coral, reef, seaside

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Just About Wed
  • Minted Sep 27, 2011
  • 6 Comments made
  • 281 Votes cast

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comments from the designer:

Featuring a coral motif, these wedding invitations are perfectly suited for a seaside celebration.

tags:

wedding invitations, beach, ocean, sea, coral, reef, seaside

colors shown:

Taupe, White, Beige, Neutral

fonts:

Birch, Futura, Sudestada

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Sep 27 2011

Edited on:

Oct 04 2011

average score:

2.31

comments:

4

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wedding invitations - Classic Coral by Just About Wed

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Moe and Me on Oct 4, 2011 at 11:44pm
Moe and Me
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Really great I love it! What do you think?

Just About Wed on Oct 5, 2011 at 6:06am
Just About Wed
  • Minted Sep 27, 2011
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I think this looks so much better! Thanks for your suggestions on this, very helpful & much appreciated :)

Dreaming Inspirations on Oct 5, 2011 at 10:26am
Dreaming Inspirations
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the changes are awesome!! nice work!!!

Wendy Van Ryn on Oct 19, 2011 at 3:40pm
Wendy Van Ryn
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good job on all the changes suggested... this looks really nice :-)

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Moe and Me on Oct 4, 2011 at 7:40pm
Moe and Me
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great changes they really made a difference, just a thought but have you tried maybe making the coral a lighter version of the back ground color and centring the text to the card?

Just About Wed on Oct 4, 2011 at 7:42pm
Just About Wed
  • Minted Sep 27, 2011
  • 6 Comments made
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great idea! let me give it a shot and see how it looks...

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Just About Wed on Sep 30, 2011 at 10:32pm
Just About Wed
  • Minted Sep 27, 2011
  • 6 Comments made
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Thanks so much, Jill! Absolutely helps, I went back & forth with the bold script so you sealed the deal for me :)

Moe and Me on Sep 30, 2011 at 11:44pm
Moe and Me
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I would lose the shadow on the coral and I looks like outer glow on the names as well, you dont need the deviding line on the out side. I would try the text aligned at the bottom of the page rather than the top. You also might want to go for a more rounded sans serif like josefin or futura also the leading in the top text and bottom text are not the same I would even that out and give all your text some more breathing room.

Melanie Severin on Oct 1, 2011 at 6:37am
Melanie Severin
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Your coral is pretty :) I agree with Moe & Me's advice that you don't need the shadow or dividing line, and could try a different sans-serif. Your text feels a bit squished between the illustration and the edge of the card (so maybe a different font will help, but otherwise, I might play around with it to give it more room - maybe a landscape format?)

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Jill Means on Sep 30, 2011 at 9:23pm
Jill Means
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I would not put laugh, live, and love in the bold script it's taking the attention away from your illustration and names. Also give a little more space from your text and the edge of the card. Hope that helps!