wedding invitations - You and I

Tags: wedding invitations, photo, retro, vintage, typesetting, heart, initials, wedding, invitation, simone klein, designkandy

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Simone Klein
  • Minted Sep 2, 2011
  • 17 Awards
  • 198 Comments made
  • 16476 Votes cast

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This 1 photo invitation features a heart with initials and creative, vintage, retro inspired typesetting

tags:

wedding invitations, photo, retro, vintage, typesettin g, heart, initials, wedding, invitation , simone klein, designkand y

colors shown:

dark brown, orange

fonts:

compendium, ostrich, sansumi, rockwell

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Oct 02 2011

Edited on:

Jan 02 2012

average score:

2.76

comments:

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wedding invitations - You and I by Simone Klein

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Debb W on Oct 7, 2011 at 9:38pm
Debb W
  • Minted Jul 14, 2011
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I like your color choices and the shining heart.

Version 1 - submitted on Oct 02 2011 - hide

Simone Klein on Oct 2, 2011 at 5:12pm
Simone Klein
  • Minted Sep 2, 2011
  • 17 Awards
  • 198 Comments made
  • 16476 Votes cast

Constructive criticism is always welcome and appreciated! :-)

Smeeta Sharma on Oct 3, 2011 at 3:25am
Smeeta Sharma
  • Minted Oct 28, 2010
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  • 10897 Votes cast

Lovely concept Simone! Not really sure about the script used as it doesn't seem to fit they rest of the design. I would choose a different script, something not so heavy. The love heart monogram is cute, but maybe a different ampersand? The dotted line is great but because it acts as a separator I keep reading the the right side first... "Invite you to Saturday May....", rather than "Michael and Simone invite you to...". Lastly, you may need a little breathing space for the text layout. I think it would be ok to reduce the point size so that you can add tracking and leading to the overall layout. Love the colours too! Oh, oops I've just written you an essay.

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