wedding invitations - Soulmates

Tags: wedding invitations, simple, black & white

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Connie Daly
  • Minted Aug 27, 2011
  • 2 Comments made
  • 4 Votes cast

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This is a simple black & white design

tags:

wedding invitations, simple, black & white

colors shown:

Black, white, red

fonts:

snell roundhand

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Sep 28 2011

Edited on:

Oct 01 2011

average score:

1.31

comments:

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wedding invitations - Soulmates by Connie Daly

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24th and Dune on Oct 1, 2011 at 7:38pm
24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
  • 33 Awards
  • 926 Comments made
  • 22766 Votes cast

This looks better but it still seems busy. What if you thinned out the text by eliminating "on" before Saturday, "at" before four and "o'clock" after four. You could also take the church address out since direction cards are a staple now. I would also play around with the type,the body size seems a little large. Also, don't be afraid to play around with the kerning and leading. I know when I started out it was very intimidating but white space goes a long way sometimes!

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24th and Dune on Oct 1, 2011 at 9:41am
24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
  • 33 Awards
  • 926 Comments made
  • 22766 Votes cast

i love the black and white palette. Very elegant! I also like how you faded the photo into the background color. I think the couples name is making the design seem busy - maybe try changing the opacity? I would also change the body font to something that is easier to read. Maybe a serif, like mrs. eaves?

Connie Daly on Oct 1, 2011 at 12:14pm
Connie Daly
  • Minted Aug 27, 2011
  • 2 Comments made
  • 4 Votes cast

Thanks for the suggestions!!! I dont have Mrs Eaves font, but i found something similiar..... i think it looks better!!!

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