gift wrap - merry words

Tags: gift wrap, xmas, simple, typography

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lulablu
  • Minted Jun 12, 2013
  • 34 Comments made
  • 817 Votes cast

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a simple way to convey the message of personal holiday cheer to loved ones with a fun color palette

tags:

gift wrap, xmas, simple, typography

colors shown:

pink, green, blue and white

fonts:

hefty font

design inspired by:

Non-Photo Gift Wrap

submitted on:

Aug 20 2013

Edited on:

Aug 20 2013

average score:

1.72

comments:

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gift wrap - merry words by lulablu

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Robin L. Andrews on Aug 21, 2013 at 7:58am
Robin L. Andrews
  • Minted Mar 21, 2013
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  • 32281 Votes cast

Great refinements, I like the new colors. :D

Version 1 - submitted on Aug 19 2013 - hide

Robin L. Andrews on Aug 20, 2013 at 9:02am
Robin L. Andrews
  • Minted Mar 21, 2013
  • 1 Award
  • 1708 Comments made
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Hi J+J, vertical channels of white space are being created by the letterspacing. Either make this detail more fun and off-beat or look at closing up the letterspacing and word space, the space between the 'R's is the most noticeable. R

Snow and Ivy on Aug 20, 2013 at 1:07pm
Snow and Ivy
  • Minted Mar 7, 2010
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This is such a fun design!! I have a little bit of a hard time reading the black text - get distracted by the merry xmas... but... if the black text contrasted the merry xmas more - that might be a really cool look. For example, if the merry xmas lines were fluorescent/hot colors or something?? Fun and funky ;)

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