birthday party invitations - Buzzing Birthday

Tags: birthday party invitations, bee, park, buzz, birthday, bug

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Kate Carpenter
  • Minted Mar 22, 2010
  • 3 Comments made
  • 614 Votes cast

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A spunky bee guides you through this cheerful party invitation.

tags:

birthday party invitations, bee, park, buzz, birthday, bug

colors shown:

green, yellow, white, black

fonts:

Arial Rounded Bold, Black Jack

design inspired by:

Kindergarten Birthday Party Invitations

submitted on:

Apr 20 2010

Edited on:

Apr 22 2010

average score:

1.83

comments:

5

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birthday party invitations - Buzzing Birthday by Kate Carpenter

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Betta on Apr 22, 2010 at 1:49pm
Betta
  • Minted Sep 9, 2009
  • 27 Awards
  • 286 Comments made
  • 9812 Votes cast

This card invokes the feeling of spring, I like it. Nice job on the dashed and looped path. Have you thought about giving "Have you heard the BUZZ?" more of a typography treatment? Or perhaps just changing "BUZZ?" to a more playful display font?

Kate Carpenter on Apr 22, 2010 at 1:55pm
Kate Carpenter
  • Minted Mar 22, 2010
  • 3 Comments made
  • 614 Votes cast

Thanks, Betta. :) I've played around with a few type treatments for the primary text, and this was the one I was most fond of, but I may goof around with another one before it's done. Still going back and forth on it. Thanks for the feedback!

Kate Carpenter on Apr 22, 2010 at 2:35pm
Kate Carpenter
  • Minted Mar 22, 2010
  • 3 Comments made
  • 614 Votes cast

OK, I swapped out the original for this, with a more playful 'buzz' treatment.

Betta on Apr 23, 2010 at 3:24pm
Betta
  • Minted Sep 9, 2009
  • 27 Awards
  • 286 Comments made
  • 9812 Votes cast

Wow! I think the new treatment is a standout -- I noticed it while I was just browsing through the thumbnails!

Alex Elko Design on May 20, 2010 at 10:22am
Alex Elko Design
  • Minted Apr 22, 2008
  • 52 Awards
  • 583 Comments made
  • 31841 Votes cast

I like the playful zigging of the bee, but I wish the 'u' connected to the 'z'.